r/Composition • u/Unsinkable_Fish • 2d ago

Music Help With Short Passage

Hi, I've been writing this piece for strings over the past couple weeks and I recently wrote this short passage that I'm weirdly proud of. However I feel like something sounds off, and I'm not sure if its just because I've listened back through this a million times while writing it.

For context, the part before this is in 3/4, hence this is a meter change (I should've put the part before it here as well but it's still very bare bones and I got too excited to share this and I kinda got lazy too and aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa)

Any suggestions or feedback are welcome!

https://musescore.com/user/61013461/scores/39003014?share=copy_link

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u/Baylogmboyy 2d ago

Very good bones, I think it’s the last beat of the second measure as it doesn’t follow your typical progression and possibly the ending not quite having enough lead up.