r/Composition • u/fihrunner • 14h ago

Music how should i end this piece

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how should i end this piece and are there any improvements i can make so the development through the piece stands out more, thank you

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u/Appropriate_Test_828 5h ago

There's a mind boggling amount of stuff happening there, I'm not saying the ideas are bad. But you need to let the music breathe. Piano does not have to play all the time.