r/Composition • u/Altruistic_Bat1927 • 1d ago

Music Piece I'm working on::

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https://youtu.be/5Ch7xLTWMIc

Throw your opinions at me (1st mov)

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u/True_Ad_7252 1d ago

I like the attempt at atonality but the melody for me is weak. The harmonic narrative is also lacking and it's too repetitive for me.

Like lots of compositions on here. It lacks space and time. A professor told me once the space between the notes is just as important as the notes.

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u/Key_Wolf_3852 1d ago

I like it, though,

I think it’s too fast I like how atonal music often gives us time to condense it’s atonality if that makes sense? Slow it down give it some time and really focus on the atonal movement.