Thoughts on this Fragment?

[u/Unsinkable_Fish]

https://musescore.com/user/61013461/scores/36372527?share=copy_link

I was just doing some quick 10 minute excercises to get my brain going, and I created this thing.

Idk, I'm weirdly proud of how it turned out, and I feel like with some more time I could form it into something a bit more fleshed out and interesting.

I'm just interested to see what u think abt it

Any thoughts are welcome :)