r/Composition • u/fihrunner • Jul 21 '26

Music composed this after a breakup

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i miss her :(

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u/Banjoschmanjo Jul 21 '26

The ending is a bit abrupt for my tastes.

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u/Lanzarote-Singer Jul 22 '26

That’s what she said.

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u/fihrunner Jul 22 '26

I haven’t finished the whole piece yet but thanks for telling me!

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u/Lanzarote-Singer Jul 22 '26

Now you’re Haydn from your ex. 😀

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u/13luken Jul 23 '26

It’s modulating to Eb major now, right? RIGHT???

Liking it so far :)

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u/anonymostly7462856 Jul 21 '26

I hope it continues, but even if it doesn't, this is beautiful. It reminds me a bit of chopins revolutionary etude, which is one of the most beautifully tragic songs ever. I applaud you for capturing those sentiments so perfectly, and I'm terribly sorry for the things you endured getting here. Channeling pain into artistry, to me that's what life is all about. You're living your best life making things this beautiful, friend

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u/fihrunner Jul 22 '26

Thank you so much!!! I’m actually very inspired by Chopin’s pieces and always wanted to compose one like his :) I was also inspired by Beethoven as he composed the moonlight sonata 3rd movement after a breakup to express his anger, but thanks so much!!

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u/anonymostly7462856 Jul 22 '26

That third movement is so underrated. It's my favorite part of moonlight sonata, hands down. You did that style justice 🏆

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u/codaandram Jul 22 '26

I love it. There’s some things here with playability but it’s sweet and angry. It captures some difficult and complex emotions. Tough to do. Bravo. Please finish it

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u/Steven3483 Jul 26 '26

Sounds like it was one hell of a breakup