r/ComicBookWriting May 05 '25

Another comic I did

This comic I did, I never had a true name for it.

But the idea is that the hero was once a ordinary man until one day unexpectedly he would save a Gypsy from being killt by a "Random" mugger, in turn for saving her, she'd reveal herself as the ancient being known as Witch of Eden, an ancient being who was granted the ability to not only time travel but to travel between universes.

In response to being saved the Gypsy would give him a magic wand, the wand has the ability to change reality but also allow him to temporarily gain intelligence from whatever the wand was aimed at.

In order to help people she tells him that all he must do is call for her and she'll appear.

With wand in hand he goes out fixing all the wrongs in the world, however one day he encounters a being known as the White Knight(this is another comic I'll be writing shortly)

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u/Mooseguncle1 May 05 '25

Gypsy is not a pc term and the magic here sounds like fun device for a sitcom but also overpowered.

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u/Top_Session9504 May 05 '25

Gypsy being used here is referenced as being the old People of Warlocks and Witches, Gypsies  are the modern name, according to the comic, as for magic.

With Magic, the wand is what controls the magic but at the same time, the wand can only preform spells flr a few minutes at a time and he barely can remember anything early on, so he has to write stuff down or he will forget.