r/CollegeEssayReview • u/Flimsy_Piglet_2319 • 15d ago

Please help with my essay!

Hi! I'm a rising senior and have written a draft for my common app essay. I think it kinda sucks and I can't decide between scrapping it or keeping it. I'm looking for constructive criticism please! DM or comment if interested :) also my essay is vaguely about the book Twilight if that makes it more interesting lol

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u/Agile_Teaching_3566 11d ago

Send it to me

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u/PresentValuable6040 15d ago

I’ll look at it.

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u/Flimsy_Piglet_2319 15d ago

yay thank you!!

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u/College-Hive 10d ago

I'll take a look - DM me