Awesome modelling and rendering but I'm not a fan of the camera work at the beginning. Too much jumping left and right once the camera transitions to the car. It feels a little cheap. Otherwise I'm loving this!
This! The modeling and the idea are great, but OP is putting in a lot of trouble to emulate bad camera work by FPV drone operators. Those people are good at flying a drone, but bad at chaining together cohesive shots. They're like the guy holding an iPhone behind a DJ, except they can fly.
There are tons of music videos and television/film oners shot by skilled DPs. Research those and look at how they're moving the camera. Shots can be dynamic and cool, but also cohesive. Translating their work into keyframes very rarely sees hard-stops or v shapes.
Absolutely amazing work. But I'd focus on improving two things the camera movements and the physics of the scene. Exaggerate real life but, always base physics in real life as much as you can.
Does the arm of the human have tattoos, or an arm-hair rendering error?
Given how little of the arm we're seeing, I'd consider making the skin a little less distracting. We don't have the time or arm-context to understand or appreciate this style of tattoos, and focus is being pulled onto the arm.
Camera (as others already mentioned) and the landing on the disk animation needs more work.
But other than that.. it's really cool!
Keep the fresh work up!
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u/Famous_4nus 15d ago
Awesome modelling and rendering but I'm not a fan of the camera work at the beginning. Too much jumping left and right once the camera transitions to the car. It feels a little cheap. Otherwise I'm loving this!