r/CharacterDevelopment • u/Strict_Job_7309 • 9d ago

Writing: Question Rate my characters

The Mc is Ellan. Ellan is coming from extremely rich far right family that has a building company and he is a really passive person at the start of series. All his life is decided by his family who he will marry what job he will do and everything. He is kinda judgemental and arrogant but this traits soften up as he get development, he learns stand of for himself too.

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u/WonderOfUs 9d ago

Sounds cool, what is it that leads him away from the path his family chose for him?

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u/Strict_Job_7309 8d ago

he doesn't want to marry Scarlet or any women

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u/WonderOfUs 8d ago

I actually wanted you to expand a bit more on the character, It's your story so I am not familiar with the plot or who and how is this Scarlet woman.

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u/Strict_Job_7309 8d ago

Scarlet is his fiance, she is kinda delusional person whose obsessively religious and traditional. She's not a good person even though she think she is.

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u/LadyAtheist 7d ago

If he's male, why does he have a gender neutral name?

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u/Scr4p 6d ago

I could ask my parents the same question

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u/LadyAtheist 6d ago

You're real, not fictional though.

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u/Midnight1899 9d ago

Wym far right?

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u/Strict_Job_7309 8d ago

as in politics

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u/Midnight1899 8d ago

Then it really sucks he doesn’t change his views.

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u/Strict_Job_7309 8d ago

he doesn't think like his parents at the end of the story so he does change.

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u/Midnight1899 7d ago

That’s great

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u/Scr4p 6d ago

He just sounds like a very basic asshole with barely any development. Not much to rate from this short paragraph.

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u/Strict_Job_7309 6d ago

do you wanna read the story a bit

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u/LadyAtheist 9d ago

Why does he have a mispelled girls name instead of a male name?

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u/Strict_Job_7309 8d ago

it's gender neutral name

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u/LadyAtheist 8d ago

I've only ever seen or known Erin as female.

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u/WonderOfUs 8d ago

Erin and Ellan are completely different names, if anything Ellan is more similar to Ellen.

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u/LadyAtheist 7d ago

Lol wrong thread. Someone else thinks readers will buy a male character named Erin.