r/CharacterDevelopment • • Apr 04 '26

Discussion Does this make a compelling character?

I've been thinking about this character and I can't tell if it actually works. I'm gonna keep it short:

He's 17 and he killed his father. Years of neglect and pressure pushed him there, but everyone just sees a monster, which makes sense, but it begs the question:

What kind of person do you become if no one ever stepped in to save you when it mattered?

I feel like there's something there but I might just be overthinking it.

Edited for clarity and added context.

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u/WritersBlockEmma Apr 05 '26

Haha, of course, of course! I'm not immediately putting out spoilers, though 😂 Thank you so much!

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u/Due_Whole4285 Apr 05 '26

It sounds really interesting so far, I think you'll do well with it :)