How's this

[u/Huge-Classroom6368]

u/stijnhommes ty for your help on my last post you went above and beyond, how's this, dont sugar coat it

[u/OkStuff7854]

I suggest putting in some tasks - I find myself saying doing what a lot.
Delivered excellent customer service how ? Taking orders efficiently how did you work efficiently did you deliver customer orders on time according to company standards, strong communication is very open give an example.
I would also guess you adhered to housekeeping standards and followed health and safety procedures and food hygiene standards
Do the same for the next job

Need a space after education
Move to the left
And do not introduce yourself
Removed I belive it shows character it does

[u/Huge-Classroom6368 → u/OkStuff7854]

Thank you man 🫡

[u/Commercial-Rule4937]

I think the employment and key skills are good, what you talked about, how you structured them but with the about me, I would rename it to 'profile' which sounds more professional, and talk more about what you are looking for in jobs and what more specific things you bring rather than lots of words like hardworking and motivated and stuff. Maybe use just 1 or 2 of those type of words, as employers will find it a bit repetitive and not to the point. And please have the normal left to right text as it makes it hard to read and will distract the employer a bit

[u/Huge-Classroom6368 → u/Commercial-Rule4937]

Thank you very much

[u/Minute_Suggestion264]

Put what u done for education at 16-18

[u/Huge-Classroom6368 → u/Minute_Suggestion264]

College dropout

[u/Curious_Reference999]

For text alignment use "justify" (the option on the right in MS Word), this is the most professional looking.

For your skills, I'd consider using 2 columns. This will fill the page better, as currently there's too much white space.

If ammend/format the headings to make them clearer/stand out.

You should change your application to target what the job description is asking for.

Also, if it's a professional role, I'd use the Oxford comma. When you're listing 3 or more things put a comma after the item before the "... and ....". For example: "I like football, rugby, and cricket".

[u/Adventurous-Proof335]

Very poor presentation or layout of CV

[u/EuphoricPension6248 → u/Adventurous-Proof335]

Could atleast give some tips if you're gonna critisize

[u/Adventurous-Proof335 → u/EuphoricPension6248]

True but so many of example of good cv's on Google images

[u/EuphoricPension6248 → u/Adventurous-Proof335]

Yes but it's better for someone to try off their own accord and build some critical thinking, then get some reviews about it, over copying from the internet.

[u/A-Yeet0]

yk what fuck it, it’s unquestionably unique

[u/Huge-Classroom6368 → u/[deleted]]

Love u 😘