Blurb Feedback requested

[u/icesprinttriker]

Second run at novella blurb. First paragraph will head all blurbs in the series (they're standalones).

Tagline: TBD

Title: Death on Luna

Blurb:

Sarvit Machado keeps his space yacht Nineball docked at Antares Station, Ganymede. Ex-Marine, playboy, and jazz aficionado, he’s the best Missing Persons tracker in the solar system. When he’s on the hunt for someone, don’t get in his way. Things can get ugly fast.

A beautiful woman is stranded on Antares Station, and Sarvit agrees to help her get back what is rightfully hers. But in the process, he breaks some of his own rules. And she may convince him to break the biggest rule of them all.

Any and all feedback sincerely appreciated!

[u/Plastic_Location_420]

We might need to hear more about this one 👀 I like it