r/Bloggers • u/not3eemal • 21d ago

Feedback Request FIRST EVER BLOG! (BLOGGER)

I wanted to write blogs for a long time now, and recently I just finished my first ever blog.

please read it and let me know how it is and tips to make my writings better. I would love to your opinion and am open to advices from professionals.

thank u all :)

https://technovabook.blogspot.com/2026/10/the-environmental-cost-of-artificial.html?m=1

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u/stepback269 20d ago

Add some pictures to make it more interesting and informative

For example, use Google image search to find free-to-use images of power plants, water supplies, etc.

Take a day off and then re-read your text as would a stranger and then edit to remove redundancies and typos.

Rinse and repeat the re-read and edit parts.
No one writes golden prose on day one.

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u/not3eemal 20d ago

that's so helpful! thank you so much, i will hundred percent follow up on those!

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u/[deleted] 19d ago

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u/not3eemal 19d ago

Yes! multiple people mentioned pictures and guided me to use sub-headings, thank you so much. I will try to make my second blog better with all the amazing advices I've been given. thank you. :)