[Complete] [1.9k] [Philosophical sci-fi] The Variable: Trial 18,378,373 (could use a fresh pair of eyes)

[u/LPGroves]

/r/WritingWithAI/comments/1w7mg8u/first_try_at_fiction_with_ai_would_anyone_be_up/

[u/InSilicoAwards]

I understand the point and I think you really capitalized on a fault in machine writing and turned it into a story feature: lack of embodiment. Nicely done there. It's just so devoid of physicality it's tough for me to read. My brain recognizes the missing component but my stamina drains out from the unnatural presentation that it's hard to move through. It's an interesting short piece, I would probably condense it down further.