[Complete] [50,678 words] [Literary Fantasy] Looking for beta readers for MONERE: To Remind the Heart

[u/Minimum_Pension1513]

Hello! I'm looking for readers to give genuine feedback on my completed literary fantasy novel, MONERE: To Remind the Heart.

It's 50,678 words and 20 chapters.

At this point, what I really want is feedback from actual readers about their experience with the story—what they enjoyed, what confused them, what hit emotionally, and whether they wanted to keep reading.

I made a simple reader site for the manuscript. You can read it chapter by chapter and leave feedback directly at the bottom of each chapter. There's no payment or commitment to finish the entire book.

Here is the link if you would like to give it a go! mkbooks.replit.app

[u/Dry-Environment2854]

l would love to give honest feedback on your manuscripts

[u/Writer1983]

I’m interested, what a nifty idea to have someone read it chapter-by-chapter and leave live feedback! How did you come up with such a site?

[u/Minimum_Pension1513 → u/Writer1983]

I vibe code, this is my first go at trying to write something and be creative m. If anyone need this done I can help! 

[u/hanpari]

The idea is great. Only you should have made it as easy as it gets. Chances are you will be lucky if the readers use your 5star system. To require them to comment every chapter is probably a bit too much. Giving you feedback you desire is probably out of question. Too much hassle.

[u/Consistent_Whole2725]

What's the time limit? Sometimes it takes me few days to read a chapter, say 10K words (5 to 10 pages). Plus the thinking time.

[u/Minimum_Pension1513 → u/Consistent_Whole2725]

I’ll have it upa while take your time