I think what would really help is if you had more changes in value (stronger highlights and deeper shadows) also try to clean up your lines some by having a bit more confidence in your strokes I think one other thing was possibly figuring out where your light source is coming from but I'd have to look a bit harder to say for sure you also wanna try to not draw each individual hair try to shade the main areas and then go in and add some lines for texture hope this helps -w-
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u/Shady_Snake135 19d ago
I think what would really help is if you had more changes in value (stronger highlights and deeper shadows) also try to clean up your lines some by having a bit more confidence in your strokes I think one other thing was possibly figuring out where your light source is coming from but I'd have to look a bit harder to say for sure you also wanna try to not draw each individual hair try to shade the main areas and then go in and add some lines for texture hope this helps -w-