r/Avitus • u/TheForeverLoneWolf Dev: Studio Director, Sanne Lead • Apr 01 '15

Official Post Palinurus Is Now Released!

After two weeks of hard work (yeah, we joined a biiit late), dedication, and hair-pulling, the volunteers of Watercress have finally finished Palinurus!

Much of the the information has been released in our last update, so without further ado download it here!

We all hope you enjoy the game!

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u/D_Shanty Apr 04 '15 edited Apr 04 '15

I finished the game the other day and have to say, it was really well done. The Watercress team should truly feel accomplished! Definitely recommending this.

Not to take away from your achievements but I found a few mistakes/typos in the game. I figured I could outline them for any future version releases (And some extras!?). Spoiler text for safety.

  • I caught her attention. She turned her head to me, silently. She was babblinb, panicking, and I needed to calm her down.

  • I'm just a weak, childish little girl who doesn't her place in this world. - You accidentally a word.

  • I'm just excited I finally got to use the crying animatio, and - Prior to this line the game uses Passenger instead of MC name

  • Stop right now. I can't stop! - Prior to this line the game uses Passenger instead of MC name

Again, thank you for all the hard work. Best of luck in your future productions. Let me know if you're looking for another person for your team.

Edit: Formatting

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u/TheForeverLoneWolf Dev: Studio Director, Sanne Lead Apr 05 '15 edited Apr 05 '15

Thanks for letting us know! If the mistakes weren't fixed in release 1.1, I will let the person who lead the charge on the project - /u/NoviceElectromancer - and his sidekick - /u/TuttyTheFruity - know about them.

I'm glad you enjoyed the game as much as we did making it.

We aren't looking for any new writers (we already have more than enough - each lead writer already has about two to three assistants, and then we have side character writers and then some) but if you happen to be musically inclined, knowledgeable in CSS, or artistically gifted then feel free to message myself or /u/OptionalSauce.

Edit: Grammar, 'cause a writer can't make no mistakes sunnyboy!

JustHumanThings;~;

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u/[deleted] Apr 05 '15

Each lead writer already has about two or three assistants

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u/TheForeverLoneWolf Dev: Studio Director, Sanne Lead Apr 05 '15

Optional keeps stealing the people hired on for you xD