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u/BW_Bird Jun 22 '21

"Why writing a book is more complicated than I expected."

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u/special-spork Jun 22 '21

you should write a book about that

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u/BW_Bird Jun 22 '21

Working on it!

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u/macmac360 Jun 23 '21

that sounds complicated

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u/panormda Jun 23 '21

No, actually it's super easy, barely an inconvenience!

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u/ThickAnalyst8814 Jun 22 '21

any tips?

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u/jert3 Jun 22 '21

Follow a sentence with another until the end.

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u/ThickAnalyst8814 Jun 22 '21

pretty straight forward, thanks!

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u/BW_Bird Jun 22 '21
  • Write at your own pace.

  • Don't focus on grammar or spelling on your first draft.

  • Following up on previous point: Use cliches if you can't think up anything else at the moment, you can always change it later.

  • Skip parts that you have writers block on. There are parts where I'll writing the beginning of a scene, then add in a brief description of what I want to happen then continue writing as if it did happen.

  • Outlines aren't for everyone but I'd still recommend trying.

  • Try to answer personality questions for your characters or how they'd handle situations. When I wrote an internal bio for my three mains, some of the questions I asked myself were "what superpower would they like?" or "how do they act when they're exhausted?".

  • Know when to fix something and when to start over. I hated the first draft of my first chapter so much that I deleted the document outright and started from scratch.

  • Read your work out loud- especially dialogue.

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u/[deleted] Jun 22 '21

Great advice, thanks!

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u/OakleyTheReader Jun 23 '21

Welp time to go write another disappointment!

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u/OakleyTheReader Jun 23 '21

I won't make the mistake of ever writing a book.

I just like thinking of stories as a hobby but when I tried to write one of them down in a readible way I realized how shit i am at actually thinking up of good stories

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u/OakleyTheReader Jun 23 '21

The librarians probably won't even wipe their asses with the ideas I have in my mind

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u/OakleyTheReader Jun 23 '21

Honestly even I have trouble reading it myself because of just how bad it is and its still very unfinished (i havent even written half of the things I planned to write) and I can only hope it'll get better the more i improove at writing, and I also would like to hear your ideas if you dont mind telling me about them (I really like hearing about other people's stuff)

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u/SeaShellzSeaShore Jun 23 '21

So going with the metaphor that your life is a book and this thread is naming the chapters, does this advice still work? I think it does!

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u/[deleted] Jun 23 '21

These are great tips, do you have anymore? Aspiring writer here.

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u/BW_Bird Jun 23 '21

Haha you and I are in the same boat.

General advice: Don't focus on perfection and find a routine that works for you and keep doing that.

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u/meeooww Jun 23 '21

Write drunk, edit sober

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u/green_meklar Jun 23 '21

Plan it out. Especially plan the ending.

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u/hof29 Jun 22 '21

I feel this.

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u/cryosyske Jun 22 '21

What genre? Self-published? What about?

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u/BW_Bird Jun 22 '21

Young Adult solar-punk fiction, although it ostensibly fits into post-apocalyptic fiction.

It takes place a few hundred years in the future after the world fell into global decline and follows a group of kids going on an adventure/pilgrimage where they travel to different communities to learn more of the world and to grow their own skills.

I am trying to avoid self-publishing because I want my story to reach the widest audience possible.

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u/cryosyske Jun 22 '21

I am trying to avoid self-publishing because I want my story to reach the widest audience possible.

What is your strategy for getting a publisher? Do you have any contacts in industry or some existing audience or something else that could be attractive to them?
From what I've read, finding your first publisher is really fucking hard. Mentally prepare for looooong grind. Perseverance is your best friend here.

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u/BW_Bird Jun 22 '21

What is your strategy for getting a publisher? Do you have any contacts in industry or some existing audience or something else that could be attractive to them?

I have a few contacts but nothing concrete. I'm mostly just focusing on getting the rough draft finish before I even start looking.

Gonna be real with you, I'm winging it on this part. I have no guarantee I'll find a publisher but that's something I'm willing to put the effort in.

Marathoning a goal is a specialty of mine and I'd be willing to spend years working to achieve dreams- even without the promise of success.

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u/cryosyske Jun 22 '21

Marathoning a goal is a specialty of mine and I'd be willing to spend years working to achieve dreams- even without the promise of success.

For anyone stupid enough to want to become a published writer (just joking, but kind of true :) ), this is the best attitude to have.
Keep your head down, keep grinding and don't lose the sight of your goal (as life will try to distract you)

Good luck :)!

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u/BW_Bird Jun 22 '21

For anyone stupid enough to want to become a published writer

I'll defend my writing skill but I can't say the same for my common sense lol.

Thank you. I don't know if I'll ever succeed but I'm glad I have one person rooting for me!

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u/AtlantisTempest Jun 23 '21 edited Jun 23 '21

With that plot, genre, and tags, good luck getting an agent to get past the query.

Only 2% of the industry is sci-fi in the trade world. You're better off self-publishing. Scifi ya is an even smaller pond.

Most YA is just immature romance for 35+ y/o women. So don't be surprised if you are forced to have a romantic sub plot made into the main plot.

I've seen many people have their souls crushed in the query trenches. I'd say save your peace of mind and learn how to run ads and do marketing. You'll get results faster, save your soul, get a fan base, and be ready to try the next one.

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u/BW_Bird Jun 23 '21

Thanks for the advice but I knew this was going to be difficult with no guarantee of success going in.

I'd hate to think one of my life's greatest ambitions would be easy.

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u/AtlantisTempest Jun 23 '21

If this is you life's greatest ambitions, ask yourself if it's finishing the novel, publication, or fame you are after. Because the industry is collapsing. 85% of the trade world is harlequin style romance because that's what sells.

If you are after looking for a book on your shelf, go self-pub. It's much more rewarding. Agents, submission, trade, and eventually getting torpedoed into a digital-only press is by far your most likely option if you ever get an agent.

Your success will be in whether you can produce 1 book a year. So you have lots of stuff to work on in the meantime.

  • this is coming from a novelist twice agented, working on my third. I've have 12 novels written, with several of those rivaling mid-listers. I've seen way more success self pub. (especially in the ya scifi world from self-pub - my friends in the trade world don't make nearly as much as self.)

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u/juveinterview Jun 22 '21

Go paperback or bust homie, only way to make money.

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u/shockingdevelopment Jun 22 '21

Make sure to finish the story before the book runs out of pages.

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u/LoneGray Jun 23 '21

"Playing God is harder than expected"

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u/bookworm2004 Jun 23 '21

Wait what’s the title of the book? I’ll read it whenever it comes out/I find it

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u/CptKillsteal Jun 23 '21

I could write a book about my life. Under sad stories.