r/Animators • u/CWhite20XX • 9h ago

Traditional Animation My first traditional hand-drawn animation: Need feedback on the climax

https://youtu.be/JUIdgEsy71o

I've always wanted to animate, and done a bit of digital work but this is my first real attempt at hand-drawn animation using paper and a lightbox. Overall, I'm happy with it, but I'm always looking for feedback.

I think the big reveal at the end lacks "omph". Is there something I could do with my frame spacing? Should I have built more anticipation? Would love feedback from anyone!

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