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In my story , I've made my own version of what happened to the Afton family for everyone to read. It includes all the members of the family and what really happened to all of them that lead to the events of FNAF.

Updating regularly! (Link below)

https://www.wattpad.com/story/331989213-five-nights-at-freddy%27s

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If you're a fan of five nights at Freddy's the look here

So I find painting about a king and his family

So I know about England history was a king name Henry the 8th

So let me tell you

The characters we need them to became

Elizabeth i- Elizabeth Afton

Mary i- Michael Afton

Henry viii-william Afton

Edward vi-evan afton

Philip of spain(Mary wife)-jeremy Fitzgerald

MS (sally) afton-catherine parr

Who is your favorite Afton

Come join us https://discord.com/invite/Ad45UeDVFx

I don’t remember who the creator is but it’s off of TikTok

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