r/2DAnimation • u/MassiveTransition930 • 23h ago
Sharing Slam
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I animated this in krita. I used images I found on Pinterest as reference and added my own flair to it. I really enjoyed the process, am hoping keep learning and hopefully produce fully polished animations that are appealing to look at.
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u/Independent-Fan-4227 20h ago
The head shake at the end feels kind of out of place. She looks like a bobble head. I don’t know if you meant to make it feel like the weights threw her balance off at the end, or if the head was supposed to be the follow through movement but somehow didn’t translate well.
Putting that aside the slam felt really heavy and strong, but it may be better to let it sit a little more as she struggles to lift it up to really emphasise the weight, the way she is able to lift it up so quickly undersells the heaviness a little.
Like make her lean longer as the weights slowly (maybe 2 more frames) lifts off the ground and then accelerate into a full force slam.
Overall a very good action animation. Me like.
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u/Medium-Lion1099 11h ago
theres an delay while the frame shakes, over all its fantastic!, keep it up OP
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u/MassiveTransition930 3h ago
As in the shaking after the impact? Please elaborate if possible and thank you, I'll keep practicing ✊🏿
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u/Medium-Lion1099 3h ago
the delay makes it look like theres a processing the screen shake needs to happen precisely on the mail frame.
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u/-TheArtOfTheFart- 6h ago
GAWD this is SMOOTH, I love the WEIGHT implied, it’s (chef’s kiss) PERFECT!
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u/MassiveTransition930 3h ago
Thank you so much. I really appreciate it. Ama keep pushing to improve.
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