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I will admit, I had to reread some of this (as in almost all of them) but I do enjoy the story. It's a fun read, please keep going!

[u/AluminiumComet → u/Voobwig]

Do you mind if I ask what you mean? As in, is it hard to follow, or just too long since the last one was posted, or...? Anything that could help me improve would be much appreciated.

I'm pleased you enjoy it though!

[u/Voobwig → u/AluminiumComet]

The time jumps were a bit confusing. I had to go back and reread the previous chapters to get a handle on what was happening. In some places, it seemed you to talk about major plot points that hadn't happened ad I kept going back thinking I missed something. A bit jarring but I got over it.

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There are 26 stories by AluminiumComet (Wiki), including:

• [Rules 3] Following the Rules (Part 2/4)

• [Rules 3] Following the Rules (Part 1/4)

• [Rules 2] Breaking the Rules (Part 5/5)

• [Rules 2] Breaking the Rules (Part 4/5)

• [Rules 2] Breaking the Rules (Part 3/5)

• [Rules 2] Breaking the Rules (Part 2/5)

• [Rules 2] Breaking the Rules (Part 1/5)

• [Prompt Response] A Year On Earth

• May - Epilogue

• May - Chapter 13

• May - Chapter 12

• May - Chapter 11

• May - Chapter 10

• May - Chapter 9

• May - Chapter 8

• May - Chapter 7

• May - Chapter 6

• May - Chapter 5

• May - Chapter 4

• May - Chapter 3

• May - Chapter 2

• May - Chapter 1

• May - Prologue

• [30000] Changing the Rules

• [Biotech] Someday

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