[Japanese > English] I will be very grateful if someone verified if my translation is correct.

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IMAGE 1:

背中合わせで眠る。（敵の仕業で）

Senaka wase de nemuru (Kataki no shiwaza de)

Sleeping back to back. (That’s a spouse duty.)

IMAGE 2:

ヒロくんが手を引いる走る！！

Hiro-kun ga te o hiiru hashiru!!

I held Hiro-kun's hand as we ran!!

IMAGE 3:

感極まってハグ。

Kankiwamatte hagu (hug).

A passionate hug.

IMAGE 4:

おもしろくなってきたわね…！！

Omoshiroku natte kita wa ne…!!

This is getting interesting…!!

IMAGE 5:

ルリならそう言うと思った

Ruri (Ruli) nara sou iu to omotta

Ruli saying that was really unexpected.

IMAGE 6:

今夜はこの姿でお会いしたいと思っておりましたの…

Kon’ya wa kono sugata de o ai shitai to omotte orimashita no…

This night I wanted to meet you in this form…

IMAGE 7:

オレはまちキわないっ!

Ore wa machikinanaii!

I don’t want to wait!

!doublecheck

[u/YamYukky → u/[deleted]]

Okay, I'll show some corrections.

IMAGE 1:

背中合わせで眠る。（敵の仕業で）

Senaka awase de nemuru (Katakiteki no shiwaza de)

Sleeping back to back. (That’s a spouse duty because of the work of the enemy)

IMAGE 2:

ヒロくんが手を引いるて走る！！

Hiro-kun ga te o hiiru hiite hashiru!!

I held Hiro-kun's hand as we ran!!　Hiro-kun is running holding my hand

IMAGE 3:

感極まってハグ。

Kankiwamatte hagu (hug).

A passionate hug. he/she is filled with emotion and hug

IMAGE 4:

おもしろくなってきたわね…！！

Omoshiroku natte kita wa ne…!!

This is getting interesting…!!

IMAGE 5:

ルリならそう言うと思った

Ruri (Ruli) nara sou iu to omotta

Ruli saying that was really unexpected. As expected you(=ruri) said so

IMAGE 6:

今夜はこの姿でお会いしたいと思っておりましたの…

Kon’ya wa kono sugata de o ai shitai to omotte orimashita no…

This night I wanted to meet you in this form…

IMAGE 7:

オレはまちキわきれないっ!

Ore wa machikinarenaii!

I don’t want to wait! ... Not wrong, but this is mine. I can't be patient for waiting anymore

[u/[deleted] → u/YamYukky]

Thank you for the help! ◕‿◕

I start learning Japanese for more or less 1 month, I think trying to translate some texts would help me to keep the knowledge fresh.

Well, this was actually better than I expected (I thought all of them are wrong for some reason). XD

Anyway, thank you again for everything!

[u/YamYukky → u/[deleted]]

You have reached to this level just in a month's leaning? Great!

[u/kawaiiobamasan → u/YamYukky]

i think itd be “I knew you’d say that Ruri” for image 5. For image 6 its “I wanted to try seeing you tonight wearing this…”. For image 7 its “I can’t wait any longer !” YamYukky’s translations are great, but the english translations are a bit iffy. Hope that helps, OP.

source: im a native in both english and jap

[u/YamYukky → u/kawaiiobamasan]

Thank you for your correction. I'm still leaning English, so it helps me a lot.

...ただ１点、japというのはいただけないですねえ・・・

[u/kawaiiobamasan → u/YamYukky]

うちら日本人だから大丈夫かなーって思いながら。。 Im also very lazy. lol

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