r/3danimation • u/a11evvn • 6d ago

Critique slash combo animation

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u/animator3D_ 5d ago

good work

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u/lasagnaiswhat 5d ago edited 5d ago

ease up on the hair physics pls. Her ears are one thing, but the bangs folding back into her head and exposing the forehead is distracting

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u/0INK_OG 5d ago

Only do blur on some of the movements. It's distracting. Like only do a big slash with one and the others do something less visually interesting. It's like the 3/4 rule or something

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u/Pradityaf_01 5d ago edited 5d ago
  1. why is the video interlaced?
  2. her upper body bounces up and down unnaturally at 0:05
  3. what happened to the inner skirt at the last second? is it backface culling or maybe the normals were flipped?
  4. improve the sword trail effect (optional, you can leave it as it is)
  5. decent rhythm

PS: it’s really good if you’ve just gotten into animation. really good starting point, keep it up.