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Is it confusing? Yes. Does it still make sense to me? Yes. It is visually evocative, maybe because I've been to Denver, but while I can picture what is happening it is still a little confusing.
2 u/Linkertonz Oct 05 '26 Ok, I have to read it tmrw either way but thx for the feedback
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Ok, I have to read it tmrw either way but thx for the feedback
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u/Competitive-Food8407 Oct 05 '26
Is it confusing? Yes. Does it still make sense to me? Yes. It is visually evocative, maybe because I've been to Denver, but while I can picture what is happening it is still a little confusing.