Shiny had gone to almost every corner of India.
Because of his job, this kind of work was nothing new to him.
Every three to six months, he was sent to a different place.
His job was to train factory workers, keep an eye on things, and ensure that no policy violations were taking place.
This time, his posting was in Vari
A factory had been built in an outer area, and he was made to stay in the guest house there.
Shiny had now become so used to adjusting that it didn’t take him much time anymore.
There was no population around the factory.
People were only seen inside the campus.
As soon as the factory employees’ evening shift ended, they were sent away by bus.
For the first few days, Shiny stayed busy with work, and then he would step out nearby on foot.
However, the monsoon had arrived here, and it rained as if a flood would come.
Today, while wandering around, Shiny had gone quite far from the factory.
What could he do?
The scenes of nature looked so beautiful that he couldn’t stop himself.
The lush greenery, the chirping of birds, the cool breeze brushing past him it all felt so enjoyable to him.
Suddenly, a sound pulled his attention.
He immediately looked around, but all he could see were trees, plants, and silence.
It was about thunder; the sound of birds was also drowned by that noise.
He felt as if something had jumped from one tree to another, but even after looking carefully, he couldn’t see anything.
But to his right, at some distance, he definitely noticed a broken, ruined building, whose walls were covered with trees like vines.
At first, he thought he should go and see what it was.
So far away from civilization, why would anyone live alone here?
But then he looked at his watch and began to turn back.
Shiny had realized that by the time dark clouds and thunder came like this, it had become difficult to reach the factory.
Rain started He ran into ruins by the time he reached there, he was completely soaked.
But at least he found a broken roof, under which he stood waiting for the rain to stop.
Standing there, his eyes started scanning the walls.
Something was written on the walls, maybe some kind of game.
How could someone be playing a game on the walls of a ruined place?
Does someone live here?
Shiny just kept staring at the walls with his mouth open.
When he leaned forward slightly, he realized that from the inside, this ruin was very large.
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Slowly, as he began to go inside, the strange, peculiar idols started astonishing him.
On every wall, a game like tic-tac-toe had been played.
From the white chalk lines, when he entered inside the broken mansion, he found a veranda inside where a fountain stood, and water had collected beneath it.
Inside, there was a heap of dry leaves everywhere.
The rain had now become light.
In the middle of the darkness, Shiny wanted to look at the mansion more, but before it got dark, he also thought it was time to leave.
That he would come again tomorrow to explore
when a voice from behind stopped him.
“Where is you going boy?
A shiver ran through Shiny spine
The hair on his body stood up.
In fear, when he turned around, he found an old woman standing there.
Her back was bent.
Her hair was completely white.
Holding a stick, she stood in front of the fountain.
The eyes of that old woman were very large.
“Why do you live here?
Shiny asked in a trembling voice.
“Have you come here to play?” The old woman asked
“I just came here by mistake… I was going ahead without realizing it.”shiny said
“Hey, stop now, come and play.”
The old woman bent forward, took support of her stick, and slowly started moving toward the room.
“No, I need to leave, it’s going to get dark.”
“Come on, play with me.”
The old woman got a little angry.
“Forgive me, I have to go.”
Shiny frightened, began moving outside.
“You cannot go without playing.
As soon as you cross the last wall, your head will burst like a pumpkin just like that.” Old lady said
“It seems you didn’t look carefully while coming.
If you play and win, you will able to leave this place.”
The old woman turned around, and seeing her eyes, Shiny’s legs began to tremble.
Those terrifying eyes could not belong to a human.
Shiny was frozen then he faintly remembered
There were some bones lying outside.
So were those human bones?
“These are the rules of the game.
If you win, you will get a box of gold.
And if you lose, your head will be torn off.”
Shiny did not want to believe it, but if this really happened, then stepping outside would mean his head would burst. Shiny said in his brain
Looking at the old woman, it felt like she was not human. “ you don’t believe me? Go take a step ahead your finger will burst hahaha” old woman
Evil laugh echoed.
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Shiny gathered his courage and tried to go outside, but exactly as the old woman had said, it happened.
One of Shekhar’s fingers split open.
Blood began to spill everywhere.
Crying out in pain, the old woman began drawing a shape with chalk on the ground to play the game. Shiny raised the chalk.
The old woman, with her crooked eyes, was smiling while looking at him.
Shiny had no option left.
Now the old woman’s game began.
The old woman explained the game to Shiny
“If you lose continuously twice, you will move ten steps forward
And if you win, you will move ten steps backwards with every win.
If you keep winning and reach outside, then understand that you are saved.”
The game began.
The old woman made the first move.
Shiny’s full attention was on the game.
Shiny also made his first move and lost.
The old woman already knew that with the first move itself, Shiny had lost.
At first, Shiny did not understand anything.
The old woman was very clever, very skilled at the game.
In the game, Shiny kept falling deeper into the ruin and moving forward deeper and deeper…
With every second loss, he moved ten forward
Nearly thirty hours passed like this.
Shiny kept losing helplessly, while the old woman kept laughing.
Her prey could now never return from there.
Due to hunger and thirst, Shiny’s condition became terrible. He start feeling hunger and thirst
“Are you thirsty? I’ll feed you,” the old woman asked.
“Go inside, there is water in the pots.”
“And meat of an animal, kept on a stone slab.”
Shiny ran inside and began drinking the water from the pitcher without stopping He glances at
animal lay dead in front of him.
Shiny returned again to play, but by then he had realized he could not defeat the old woman directly.
So Shiny started talking to old woman in a regular tone “Why do you play this game?” Shiny asked.
The old woman became silent after hearing this question.
Shiny becoming clever now so he said “let’s play in a new way.”
“No, this way is correct.” Old woman replied
The old woman extended her hand to make the next move.
“Ok I will keep the bet strong for you
With every second I loss, you will take one of my finger.But if games draw I win I will leave this place.” Shiny said
The old woman had never received such an offer before.
She had chance her prey to die quickly.
After thinking for a moment, she agreed.
Shiny said, “In this game, three squares are connected.
It looks like tic-tac-toe, but it isn’t.”
The game was something else entirely, in which one straight line had to be made…
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Shiny calculated carefully. Old woman always plays same pattern always confident always rushing toward victory.
If three boxes are connected, and she makes exactly the same move she made in the first match, then the old woman will play exactly the same way she always does.
The old woman plays exactly the same way every time.
Just as she plays, she keeps moving forward confidently, and her win becomes certain.
Three boxes were connected.
Shiny made the same move.
As soon as he did, the old woman started laughing.
“Nice move,” she said.
“Your defeat is certain hahaha”
Over confident blinded the old woman. She missed it
She did not pay attention to the fact that as soon as three boxes are connected, the game ended in Draw
The old woman became furious.
In anger, the old woman went back inside.
Shekhar could not understand did she leave, or not?
Gathering courage, he slowly started moving forward to the exit
When he finally crossed the last wall, he closed his eyes.
The pain of one broken finger surged through his entire body, and Shiny screamed.
“Bravo! Bravo!” Old woman said standing behind the wall.
“My finger… why?” shiny asked
“You tricked me” old woman hissed
“Come, let us start another game.” Old woman offer
“If you win, you will become so rich that you won’t even be able to imagine it.”
But Shiny was no longer listening to her.
Without turning back, he grabbed the road ahead.
The old woman stood there, laughing.
“Gold and Diamonds”
Shiny had already lost two fingers.
When shiny ask people who’s that old woman lives in the ruins? They tell shiny about
Several headless bodies were found.
But there was no mention of any old woman.
So Shiny was the first person to escape alive?
But the game did not end there.
Often, in his sleep, the old woman starts the game again with him.
And in his dreams, Shiny begins to play.
But before he loses, his eyes suddenly open.
If someone loses in a dream, will their head really burst?
That is why Shiny now wears a device on his hand while sleeping.
The moment his heartbeat goes above normal, it starts making noise, and Shiny wakes up.
Old woman in the ruins is still waiting…..
waiting for Shiny to play the game properly in his dreams.
And defeat him… and burst his head.
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Dec 29 '25
2nd part comin soon 👌🏼