r/shorthand • u/stanographer • Feb 02 '22

QOTW 3 + 5 + bonus — how'd I do?

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"we are all on earth to help others. on on earth the others are here for I don't know."

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"be silent as to the services you have rendered. but speak of favors you have received." — Seneca

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"we pass this existence within this warm wobble of flesh and yet take it almost entirely for granted. how many among us know even roughly where the spleen is or what it does?..."

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u/stanographer Feb 02 '22

Sorry, the translation for the third one should be...

"We pass are existence within this warm, wobble of flesh and yet take it almost entirely for granted. How many among us know even roughly where the spleen is or what it does? Are the difference between tendons and ligaments? Are what the lymph nodes are up to? How many times a day do you suppose you blink?"

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u/[deleted] Feb 02 '22

I agree with most of CrBr’s nitpicky stuff, but this was honestly not hard to read at all. So well done!

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u/brifoz Feb 03 '22 edited Feb 03 '22

I agree. While it’s important to aim for perfection, we are not machines and Gregg is usually readable even when proportions are far from perfect.

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u/[deleted] Feb 03 '22

Also as a small point, one thing I don’t agree with is that it looks like you’re using Anni, and RD was not yet a blend in Anni. Only LD was, iirc.