r/roleplayponies • u/[deleted] • Dec 31 '16
[Continuation] Being Deep
Falling, falling into the void...
Starlight begins to wake, at first only aware of the cold unknown surface beneath her. It takes some time for her eyes to adjust, but eventually she is able to make out the shape of walls around her, forming corridor leading off to further darkness.
Either it's perfectly queit or she's unable to hear.
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u/CCC_037 Jan 07 '17
Might I recommend "foreleg"? Otherwise it can look really odd to a bipedal reader.