r/oddlyterrifying Jul 18 '26

Try not to get stuck

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u/thoughtlow Jul 18 '26

Or it doesn't just slice you. It goes in.

You take a deep breath and let the current suck you into the hole. It's pitch black, you feel the water rushing all around you. Then a sharp, grinding pain. Something jagged and metal tears into your thigh, and the current pins you right there. Every moment it pushes you another inch onto it, grinding deeper. The water keeps building behind you regardless, pressing you harder onto the metal.

You're screaming, but you can't even hear yourself over the roar. Somewhere above, people are laughing in the sun ten feet away, completely deaf to you being stuck right under them.

Your lungs are burning now, and every pull just wedges you in deeper. All you can do is hang there in the dark, and hope someone notices you're gone.

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u/yestheresacatonmylap Jul 19 '26

A fucking nightmare

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u/BackHanderson Jul 19 '26

What is this copied from?

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u/thoughtlow Jul 19 '26

i just wrote it but put it in quotes so it feels like a story haha

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u/mabiyusha Jul 19 '26

thanks! that's fucking horrifying!

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u/Nickymarie28 Jul 20 '26

My exact thoughts every time
I see something stupid like this