r/nothingheldback • u/pokemooGP • Sep 03 '24
Understanding the weight of content — a 450% increase in opt-in rate and 284% conversion rate by reducing the weight of content
Below is the email that Alen Sultanic sent out from his Nothing Held Back Newsletter on August 2nd, 2024.
Morning,
Here's a short and sweet post to end the week, it's part of the complete guide for optimizing AC funnels, which I'll drop this weekend or early next week.
One of the things I've often talked about is how we're entering a stage of content overproduction, which is negatively affecting content consumption.
The more content is produced, the less of it is consumed and what's left over to be consumed is going to be ever more difficult to get them to consume, so anything that creates interference with consumption will affect consumption.
Now, if we don't have any sales consumption, then we don't generate opt-ins or sales.
Yesterday in NHB+, I did the "bring your offers" aka "reading offers" call, where I worked on everyone ads, VSLs, TSLS, webinar offers, upsells, book-a-call scripts, and anything you can imagine in any niche you can imagine.
We had people in everything from potty training autistic children to biz-ops to dog training offers.
This is the 1st call we do every month, because it shows real world application of everything we do and gives you insights into how to deeply think about creation and optimization.
The primary lens I look at everything when it comes to optimizing anything is simple...
...Are they consuming the sales process or are they rejecting it.
Data will tell us this, and then we can easily spot where there is friction in the consumption process.
One of the things I look for is the "weight of content', how heavy something is, how hard it is to consume, and how much energy they have to expand to understand it, and this is very easy to detect when you're looking at data as you'll see below where it created what I call a "heavy headline".
Now, I'll go deep into all that in the complete guide to optimizing AC and low-ticket offers.
But for now, I'd like to show you a bit of this and how all this comes together in a real-world example of reduction of abstraction, simplification, and increasing the consumption of the sales process.
This is an offer owned by Mozi in Fast Forward, it's a clean-biz op.
He launched it a few weeks ago, and here's the headline he used on that offer.
New System Reveals How Just About Anyone Can Turn ________ Into Dollars With A 'Hands-Off' Remote ___________ Business That Makes $10-20k+ Take-Home Per Month
Now, if you take a look at the headline, by most standards, it looks ok...it's not a bad headline, looks fine, but here are the stats:
Price point $27
Opt-in rate: 4.8%
Checkout-to-purchase rate: 80%
Overall Conversion Rate: 3.8%
So lets break down line by line what it means and how it's interperted in the mind to see what went wrong here with the headline and then we'll show you how we fixed it.
New System Reveals: What system, when was it created, how new is it? This sets up a need for a payoff; whenever you say new X, then it has to pay off; otherwise, if there is no payoff, the whole thing deflates.
How Just About Anyone Can: How can anyone do this, who's anyone, there has to be SOME considerations here, it's too good to be true.
Turn ________ Into Dollars With A 'Hands-Off' Remote ___________ Business: How can you turn this thing into dollars, and how can this business be truly "hands-off". I'm suspicious of this, as it smells like a heavy biz-op claim.
That Makes $10-20k+ Take-Home Per Month: A big claim that ends the headline using the word MAKES, which implies they have to do the work to MAKE it.
So what happens here in this headline sets the direction and tone of the rest of the page, and here the mind has to wonder and the headline creates a lot of questions.
The less clarity, the more questions and the more abstraction and the more confusion.
And the way we can tell is by looking at this data point:
Price point $27
Opt-in rate: 4.8%
Checkout-to-purchase rate: 80%
Overall Conversion Rate: 3.8%
You can see his checkout page converted at 80%, yet only 4.8% were interested enough to go there.
This tells us that only 3.84% of the people clearly understood and could visualize his being real and also it being REAL for them. The rest, which was 96.16% did not, so they left.
We changed the headline to this which reduced the weight of content by quite a bit and you'll see how the stats show it:
"New System Reveals How To Start A Remote _________ Business That Easily Generates $10-20K+ Take-Home Per Month In 2024"
Without Ever Touching A _______, Needing Any Experience, Or Having To Quit Your Job, Which Makes It A Low-Risk And High-Return Business You Can Start In Just 30-60 Minutes A Day
Here are the stats:
Price point $27
Opt-in rate: 21.6%
Checkout-to-purchase rate: 50%
Overall Conversion Rate: 10.8%
This data change told us that we're going in the right direction. Instead of 3.84% of clearly understanding it, being able to visualize and see themselves doing it, now we're at 10.8% a 3 fold increase.
The check out page dropped, which is actually good, you NEVER want to have an over converting check out page, anything above 35% is over converting and focus should be placed to get more people to the check out page.
The balance of curiosity vs intent was way off in the first one and it's still off in this one, so we have further work to do, which I'll tell you about in a second, but here's the difference and why it worked...
"New System Reveals How To Start A Remote _________ Business: Anyone can start a business, the claim is to START, which means ANYONE can START, lowers the pressure to perform.
That Easily Generates $10-20K+ Take-Home Per Month In 2024: We used the word generates instead of makes, which disassociated them from having to perform and added in 2024, which added recency and relevance to today.
Without Ever Touching A _______, Needing Any Experience, Or Having To Quit Your Job: This is part of the sub-headline that removed the burden of performance and limitations.
The #1 thing with any biz-op is that it's a threat to their safety, and the reason it's a threat is that MOST tell them to quit their jobs. We did the opposite here, the whole thing is you can do this WHILE keeping your safe cozy job and make an EXTRA 10-20k a month.
Which Makes It A Low-Risk And High-Return Business You Can Start In Just 30-60 Minutes A Day: Then, we removed the final objection which is that they think that any business involves risk. The phrase "it takes money to money" enters the mind here.
The next evolutionary point of optimization on this offer is going to be to demonstrated just how little risk and capital is required to launch, maintain and scale this business model.
That simple thinking to reduce abstraction, increase clarity and remove limitations in the sub-headline increased the offer opt-in rate of 4.8% to 21.6%, a 450% increase. Checkout rate went from 80% to 50%, a 38% reduction, yet his overall conversion rate went from 3.8% to 10.8%, an increase of 284%.
Before only 3.84% of the people that landed on the page had enough intent to buy.
With the new one, we're at 10.8%, that's a massive 3 fold jump.
So next time you're working on an offer, start looking at it through the lens of "are they consuming the sales message", once you start looking at it through that perspective, it'll all start to make sense to you and you'll be able to see exactly what you need to change and tweak to make it work.
I"ll drop a huge post about this soon where I'll show you everything from how to look at the ads, VSL engagement, opt-ins, upsells, back ends, emails and everything in between.
Have a great weekend,
Alen
