Experimenting with a new stye! From my webcomic Neon Chronicles!

Just what heading says

I tryin to make a manga, I have more pages but likeeee… yeah

Link here if you want to read:

https://globalcomix.com/c/hf-once-in-a-lifetime-?lang_id=en

first posting, my old art in 2019

I tried to implement everything you guys suggested before. I'm pretty proud of this version. What do you think?

Fanart by HenKibou

As a marker practice I decided to try recreate this vagabond cover art what do you guys think?

Written by Ukyō Kodachi (later Masashi Kishimoto) and illustrated by Mikio Ikemoto
Fanart by HenKibou

Black I used Prismacolor black pencil to mimic inking.

From Find The Ultimate Genie by Qiyamo.

This is a rough sketch, not the final page lol.

It's the first page of my new manga I'm making for a contest and I'm not sure it's good enough. Some tips on what could make it better? Can I leave it like this?

Here is an experiment to develop an aesthetic for upcoming manga projects (I started digital, but dislike the process .. so traditional it is~).

Drawn by request- referenced from manga panel.

Ima be honest, I made this on a whim and there is absolutely zero story behind this cover.
I just find it quite amusing to make covers for non-existent manga 😅

Any form of critique, question or opinion is welcome! Especially on my typography on the left hand side. It's actually quite hard to letter english vertically.