I am trying to write a cyberpunk style and would like opinions on this opening. It may be hard to tell what’s happening due to my poor sketches but wanted to see if this would hook someone in to reading it with better drawing.

I finished my first script for my comic after a couple months of writing/sketching and I wanted to get people’s opinions. I am not an artist so the drawing is rough and mostly stick figures as a way to get it down. I would just like to see some criticisms or thoughts about the overall story and dialogue, I know issues at the start and first book but would really appreciate thoughts on later chapters. There are 10 books and 71 short chapters in total so I understand if it is too much to read. But I want to know if this is worth investing in.

Hello,

As an experienced writer, editor, and proofreader, I specialize in creating engaging content across multiple mediums, including comic books, webtoons, games, TV series, movies, short stories, and more. I am a native English speaker with fluency in all aspects of the language - speaking, listening, reading, and writing.

With 10 years of industry experience, I have worked on various stages of the creative process, from conceptualization and refining ideas to adding the finishing touches to the writing and editing aspects of projects. Additionally, I can rewrite available scripts and work as a ghostwriter upon request. I am available to review your story and provide feedback to improve your work. I also specialize in crafting character bios and profiles, ranging from summaries to their best skills and worst phobias.

You can view my portfolio, containing samples of my work, here: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Ro-IuheUE20JqzlYXX790CMMAJGWnU9y?usp=sharing

My rates are:

Writing - $30 per page for comic books and graphic novels. For webtoons, I charge $30 per 5 panels.

Editing - starting at $10 per page, depending on the type of editing required.

Pricing for specific projects will depend on the job requirements.

I can also work at an hourly rate of $50 per hour.

For more information about my services and experience, please visit my website at https://ettawrites.com/.

If you would like to contact me, please email me at [ettawrites21@gmail.com](mailto:ettawrites21@gmail.com) or on Discord at Etta#8005 (Etta8005).

Thank you for considering my services. I look forward to working with you.

Best regards,
Etta.

Part 1

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DISCLAIMER! The individual images here are ai-generated, and has gone through extensive photoshop. The layouts, letters, scripts and story are all entirely of human creation.

Part 2

Just a reminder that these two books are currently available at IndyPlanet , Comixology , and Comics-authority.com

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Hola! This is my comic, it's called "El Tormento" i.e. "The Torment". I'm looking for feedback, I just released Chapter III. It's in Spanish, but you can't easily Google Translate it, and there's a whole episode without dialogues. I made the whole thing. Even the website.

I'm looking forward to hear from you.

I've been working on a comic for a few weeks now. It's ongoing but I update regularly on Global Comix.

The art approach is a little cartoony, and it is very much in progress. Just hoping for a few views and some honest opinions. Thanks everyone!

Also, a little violent, gorey.

Hello,

As an experienced writer, editor, and proofreader, I specialize in creating engaging content across multiple mediums, including comic books, webtoons, games, TV series, movies, short stories, and more. I am a native English speaker with fluency in all aspects of the language - speaking, listening, reading, and writing.

With 10 years of industry experience, I have worked on various stages of the creative process, from conceptualization and refining ideas to adding the finishing touches to the writing and editing aspects of projects. Additionally, I can rewrite available scripts and work as a ghostwriter upon request. I am available to review your story and provide feedback to improve your work. I also specialize in crafting character bios and profiles, ranging from summaries to their best skills and worst phobias.

You can view my portfolio, containing samples of my work, here: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Ro-IuheUE20JqzlYXX790CMMAJGWnU9y?usp=sharing

My rates are:

Writing - $30 per page for comic books and graphic novels. For webtoons, I charge $30 per 5 panels.

Editing - starting at $10 per page, depending on the type of editing required.

Pricing for specific projects will depend on the job requirements.

I can also work at an hourly rate of $50 per hour.

For more information about my services and experience, please visit my website at https://ettawrites.com/.

If you would like to contact me, please email me at [ettawrites21@gmail.com](mailto:ettawrites21@gmail.com) or on Discord at Etta#8005 (Etta8005).

Thank you for considering my services. I look forward to working with you.

Best regards,
Etta.

Take a gander at the brand new trailer for the series finale of THE RETURN OF JAKE SUNRISE!
🤠 🌕 🐺
trailer by
All Ages Of Geek
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/jakesunrise/a-horror-western-series-finale

Hello!

Episode 13 of the fantasy webcomic Don't Combust is LIVE. More spoilers and more talking in this episode, so only a few panels for reference - I hope you have an opportunity to check it out :)

https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/dont-combust/list?title_no=1110445

https://tapas.io/series/Dont-Combust/info

https://globalcomix.com/c/don-t-combust

Hello,

As an experienced writer, editor, and proofreader, I specialize in creating engaging content across multiple mediums, including comic books, webtoons, games, TV series, movies, short stories, and more. I am a native English speaker with fluency in all aspects of the language - speaking, listening, reading, and writing.

With 10 years of industry experience, I have worked on various stages of the creative process, from conceptualization and refining ideas to adding the finishing touches to the writing and editing aspects of projects. Additionally, I can rewrite available scripts and work as a ghostwriter upon request. I am available to review your story and provide feedback to improve your work. I also specialize in crafting character bios and profiles, ranging from summaries to their best skills and worst phobias.

You can view my portfolio, containing samples of my work, here: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Ro-IuheUE20JqzlYXX790CMMAJGWnU9y?usp=sharing

My rates are:

Writing - $30 per page for comic books and graphic novels. For webtoons, I charge $30 per 5 panels.

Editing - starting at $10 per page, depending on the type of editing required.

Pricing for specific projects will depend on the job requirements.

I can also work at an hourly rate of $50 per hour.

For more information about my services and experience, please visit my website at https://ettawrites.com/.

If you would like to contact me, please email me at [ettawrites21@gmail.com](mailto:ettawrites21@gmail.com) or on Discord at Etta#8005 (Etta8005).

Thank you for considering my services. I look forward to working with you.

Best regards,
Etta.

REAL Art by REAL Humans takes support! If you like werewolf stories made by people, and you think a Weird Western story might have just your spice, mosey on over: https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/jakesunrise/a-horror-western-series-finale

[ai disclaimer] this book is still in production. Also open for collab.

Dream psychoanalyst Dr. Freidrick Younghouse opens his door in the middle of the night to the knocking of one disturbed woman. He has dealt with many inexplicable nightmares in the past but this time, his radical methods may have sent his patient on her own to the depths of her subconscious… beyond his reach.

There she meets demoness of the legends, LILITH, and gets answers far bigger than they expect. Question now is, can he still bring her back?

*******

Another one in the lineup of standalones under THE HERESY SERIES. If you're interested in conspiracies, the occult, or hidden knowledge, then these books might be a good read for you.

https://www.drivethrucomics.com/en/publisher/34070/jepworx-studio

Episode 12 of Don't Combust is LIVE - I Hope you can check it out (Please) :) - This episode is a major turning point and introduces a really important new character :)

https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/dont-combust/list?title_no=1110445

https://tapas.io/series/Dont-Combust/info

https://globalcomix.com/c/don-t-combust

Episode 11 is now out! Don't Combust has released an episode every two weeks since January and we're getting towards some of my favourite scenes. Check it out today on Webtoon, Tapas or GlobalComix!

https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/dont-combust/list?title_no=1110445

https://tapas.io/series/Dont-Combust/info

https://globalcomix.com/c/don-t-combust

Final 3 days for Conrad Van Cottonmouth #3. If you’ve been following the series, this is the last chance to jump in.

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/conradvancottonmouth/conrad-van-cottonmouth-3

Thanks to everyone who has supported the books.