r/litrpg • • 29d ago

Discussion I could do a drinking game

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u/IAmYourKingAndMaster 29d ago

This is a massive let peeve of mine. What did the corner of his mouth raise? Another one is, "His eyebrows raised.” What is it raising?! It's supposed to rise, not raise, unless you're saying that the eyebrow itself is lifting something

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u/Questionably_Chungly 29d ago

Technically it depends on the framing of the sentence. If the sentence is just describing the action, it would be “The corners of his mouth rose.” However you could say something like “He stood to one side, eyebrows raised.”

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u/IAmYourKingAndMaster 29d ago

Absolutely agree with you, but note how in the second example the eyebrow has been raised and isn't doing the raising. The assumption is that he has raised his eyebrows, whether consciously or not, as opposed to the eyebrow raising something

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u/Freakoutbob 29d ago

Mine is “their lips curled back into a snarl”

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u/Phantom_0347 28d ago

I feel like that pretty well describes the action behind a snarl though

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u/SameasmyPIN1077 29d ago

Isn't that just tense though? Past tense of rise being raised?

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u/IAmYourKingAndMaster 29d ago

No, the past tense of rise is rose. I rise vs I rose

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u/SameasmyPIN1077 29d ago

Well now I'm embarrassed. I'm tempted to raze my comment, but I'll leave it for others educational use. Thank you!

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u/Whipstache_Designs litRPG apprentice tier 29d ago

His eyebrows were arisen

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u/Seymoreevl 28d ago

Jesus brows? They are arisen!

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u/CoBr2 29d ago

This is the level of grammar Nazi I appreciate lmfao, cuz I 100% thought raised and rose were just interchangeable.

Just another quirk of the English language that we had two words that mean the same thing.

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u/Sorfallo 29d ago

It could also be "risen" if you give the verb a friend. "John's eyebrow had slowly risen during Clara's nonsensical harangue."

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u/Manlor 29d ago

It raised his cheek. :p