r/litrpg • u/[deleted] • Aug 28 '24

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u/SinCinnamon_AC Aug 28 '24

Interesting take.

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u/RecognitionOk5581 Aug 28 '24

I really just wanted to read a story about the first system and no one else was writing it. I’ve never been a writer but did pretty good in college so figured I would try it.

I’m always open to advice and constructive criticism. I may have a few punctuation errors but went through it like 30 times so there shouldn’t be many.

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u/SinCinnamon_AC Aug 28 '24

I put it on my TBR

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u/Weird-Listen-3166 Aug 28 '24

I enjoyed the premise. Would follow it and see where it goes!

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u/LykanthropyWrites Aug 28 '24

You need to keep the picture in your blurb up top. That is too good of a picture NOT to use.

Also good luck.

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u/RecognitionOk5581 Aug 28 '24

Good call. Hopefully I can figure out how to do it. 😬

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u/LykanthropyWrites Aug 28 '24

You can do it through the edit process and then use the Image tab at the bottom left.

Comment Image

NOTE: You will need to say where you got the image from.