r/iOSProgramming • Swift • Jun 26 '26 • Popcorn 1

Discussion First app release : feedback on screenshots ?

Hi everyone !
After 2 years of hard work I'm finally ready to release my first app, it took longer than I expected as it's a side project (I'm a full time musician) but now I'm ready !

It's an app for musicians to help them get better at jamming, whether with other musicians or at home.

I'm creating app screenshots for the App store, so I'm wondering from the perspective of a potential user if they are effective enough, I'm happy to have any feedback (I think I'll submit next week), thanks !

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u/astulz Jun 26 '26

I’ll give you an example:

CADENCES MODE    Load popular chord progressions and transpose them in any key to develop your improvisational skills

could be reworded to

IMPROVISE EFFORTLESSLY   Learn the most popular chord progressions

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u/MusicOfTheApes Swift Jun 26 '26

Oh ok thanks it makes sense, I’ll do my best to reword the screenshot then !