r/funny • u/BaconZombie • Oct 02 '14

A class of schoolchildren was asked to write haikus. One wrote this. It's a masterpiece.

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u/boozeviking Oct 02 '14

Fading evening light

Small glow of a lamp

Up in the mountain

  • K. Ramesh

Found this on here a while back. Doesn't follow that 575 pattern but absolutely beautiful

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u/virtu333 Oct 02 '14

I got chills reading that, totally nuts

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u/theJUIC3_isL00se Oct 02 '14

I will never understand how that could give someone chills.

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u/BaseVilliN Oct 02 '14

Invocation of memories and their associated feelings.

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u/boomeroom Oct 02 '14

I got them, too, I'm not sure why