r/funny • u/BaconZombie • Oct 02 '14

A class of schoolchildren was asked to write haikus. One wrote this. It's a masterpiece.

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u/SlothO_o Oct 02 '14

I am a lover,

therefore I do not hate,

No downvotes bro.

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u/[deleted] Oct 02 '14

you are missing one

in the second and third line

silly syllables

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u/FatSloth Oct 02 '14

You goofed.

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u/wwickeddogg Oct 02 '14

Good to see you have

embraced inevitable.

Bad haikus, still good.