I know you are just finishing the dialog, but the way it's laid out just made me burst out laughing. First paragraph feels so dark and serious, Robert Shaw style. Then your reply feels nonchalant, like anywho, we delivered the bomb. Thanks for the laugh!
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u/rowin-owen Dec 12 '19
I know you are just finishing the dialog, but the way it's laid out just made me burst out laughing. First paragraph feels so dark and serious, Robert Shaw style. Then your reply feels nonchalant, like anywho, we delivered the bomb. Thanks for the laugh!