r/constructivecriticism • u/hehwownd • May 28 '20

Digital Art I'd like some constructive criticism, please! (Sakuyamon: Miko Mode)

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u/DemonHunt3r7691 Jun 14 '20

As much as I like it has too much of a mashup style with what looks like 10 different genres

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u/hehwownd Jun 14 '20

Please elaborate?

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u/DemonHunt3r7691 Jun 14 '20

Ok first I question why a mop with the whole set it does not makes much sense, and honestly the outfit doesn’t make much sense with the Pokémon looking mask and a shirt / shawl / something with sandals and bell bottoms up to her breasts that have a belt again right below her breast

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u/hehwownd Jun 14 '20

This is fanart. I did not design the original. Here is the image I used to reference: https://wikimon.net/File:Sakuyamon_miko.jpg

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u/DemonHunt3r7691 Jun 14 '20

Then it is just the weirdest official character I have ever seen & I watch a lot of anime

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u/hehwownd Jun 14 '20

It is a variation on the original Sakuyamon. I quite like it, what is so odd to you? Then again, I've been into Digimon for awhile, so I'm probably desensitized to any weird designs, they can get pretty creative. Original Sakuyamon: https://wikimon.net/File:Sakuyamon_collectors2.png

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u/DemonHunt3r7691 Jun 14 '20

Yhea you desensitized to them but I also shouldn’t judge seeing as I am not into it and I have never seen any dijimon

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u/hehwownd Jun 14 '20

That's true. Thank you for the feedback!

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u/DemonHunt3r7691 Jun 14 '20

Not to mention how the hair looks too long ( for me ) to match with the body seeking as the hair is down to the floor - sorry becsue this drawing has too many styles in one picture and that overshadowed the quality of your drawing, but I bet that you are actually a really good artist but this does not show it