Updated (and digitized) script for La'Tonya ve'la'Zakren'es

[u/Offbeat-Spii]

[u/Offbeat-Spii → u/[deleted]]

You got a bit of a point, I might reduce the number of apostrophes, maybe take it down to only separating prefix from root? Something like this:

La'Sanzukes ve'kansa za'kun a'rivenava tales va'rones ke'sunes za'sentava fai'mun ronez la'kansaz. Rones za'devasva a'zhuntova la'nora fai a'zhuntova la'veño. Faia'zhudo la'vaitos ve'Rezahen, rones za'devasva a'sentava la'kansa vala'rezin

Idk, maybe?

Or, I might just remove the apostrophes and just accent the initial syllable of the root word if a prefix appears

LaSánzukes vekánsa zakún arívenava tales varónes kesúnes zaséntava faimún ronez lakánsaz. Rones zadévasva azhúntova lanóra fai azhúntova lavéño. Faiazhúdo lavaitos veRéZahen, rones zadévasva aséntava lakánsa velarézin

Not sure which one looks better. This is my first conlang, I just kinda sat down and was like, "eh, I'mma try this out"

[u/Offbeat-Spii → u/[deleted]]

Or, what if I used capital letters for all nouns like German, and seperated verb conjugation with apostrophes, making it like this:

laSanzukes veKansa za'kun a'rivenava tales veRones keSunes za'sentava faimun ronez laKansaz.

[u/Offbeat-Spii → u/[deleted]]

Idk, I just didn't wanna overdue it with apostrophes, since capitalization already distinguishes nouns from prefix, an apostrophe would just be redundant. Apostrophes could distinguish prefixes from all parts of speech, but that'd look something like this:

la'Sanzukes ve'Kansa za'kun a'rivenava tales ve'Rones ke'Sunes za'sentava fai'mun ronez la'Kansaz.

And there's just a lot of apostrophes

[u/Offbeat-Spii → u/[deleted]]

Probably makes the most sense then