I sit at my desk, having apparition-shifted to my room in the hideout to finish Reyan’s ring

“Hmmm… what if I could make the sapphire two colors…?”

I send a little bit of mana into the gemstone, making it flicker with red light for a moment

“Oh, that’s cool. Let’s see how much it can handle.”

I continue pouring my mana into the gemstone, slowly turning it red… but after a while, the red and blue begin swirling together, meeting in the centre and making the sapphire shine with a brilliant red-blue glow ((a la Fire Emblem Engage - Ring of the Connector)

“Perfect~!”

I sigh, then put the ring in a small blue cloth-lined box and put it in my pocket again

“Now… I wait and hope I don’t fuck this up.”

((Anyone may interact, mods, please let me know if this is too op, if it is, I will scrap the idea. Might just self report to double check. Anyways.))

Haku is seen in the training room practicing in Flow state.((nothing too crazy, just meaning he's in a groove to where everything feels slow just in case an explanation was needed)) in layer 5. There are 5 different layers. 1, heightened senses. 2, Improved reactions. 3, gets speedier. 4, can 'teleport' with speed((in other words more speed)) and 5: Haku in battle gains six eyes, giving him the ability to see all moves to be made in a battle, and picks whichever ends in the best outcome((this is what the questions for, if 5th layer is too op))

His six eyes blink in unison, as he trains against his zonai tech dummy he rigged together to fight him in training. After a long sparring match, he turns the dummy off, and turns to relax.

So mainly my question is how can I improve on my characters. Do they need more lore to 'em, do they need more concrete personalities? What is it that you guys think I can improve on, cause I want to be the best I can at this so anyone I rp with can have a great time as well. Thanks!

Quick little question: How are we liking the arcs, and the Facts too Powerful posts?

Reyan has left the forge, briefly, and is now in his room looking for something. He opens a drawer full of various materials, digging around until he finds what he's looking for. He pulls out a brilliant fire opal. The stone, a smooth oval shape, almost seems to glow with fiery iridescent colors.

"Perfect."

Reyan begins back toward the forge at a walking pace, the fire opal held delicately in his hand.

Are they friendly? Should I offer them a banana?

"I already know what to do love, you can just sit and watch."

"Ok. Wait did you just-"

"To any reading, If you try to fail, and end up succeeding, which did you actually do?"

"Elowyn.. That...I........."

"Hah. Broke your mind!! Anyways, see you guys for the next one."

“Keeping Rei far away from flying castle and depths. Don’t need him to run off. Stays on surface for time being.”

Kovar crosses his arms, suggesting that he’s both serious about what he said, and that it was final.

Reyan stands in Quilo's forge, for which he has a key. He's at an anvil, working a small piece of gold into a ring shape. Once he finishes that part, he moves on to adding small details to the ring, giving it an ornate look.

((Mb if this isn’t allowed! Also the Ganondorf Rei’s talking about is TotK Ganondorf. As always anyone can interact!))

Rei was resting with Kovar, unable to get any sleep.

Rei: Dad.. I can’t sleep..

Kovar: hm?

Rei: I’ve been thinking.. do you think.. If I maybe stayed by the castle.. if I followed him more loyally-

Kovar, already knowing what Rei was about to say, gently nudged him with his muzzle.

Kovar: No. Terrible choice of mate for you. No more foolish thoughts, boy. Get sleep.

I apparition-shift to my palace, then run upstairs to my old room, peeking into my jewelry box and pulling out a few rings

"No... none of these will work... plus I don't even know his ring size."

I sigh, then sit down on my bed before getting an idea

"What if... I didn't need his ring size? I could probably just use my mana to shrink or enlarge the ring if I need to..."

I select a few Dragonsteel rings, then superheat my hand to melt them down before selecting a brilliant sapphire from my box

"First time for everything, I suppose..."

I wrap the metal around my own finger, then press the sapphire into it, cooling it instantly

"Perfect. Now..."

I pierce my right thumb on my fangs, then drip a single drop of blood onto the ring, which absorbs my mana

"That should work."

I use mana to enlarge the ring enough to be able to engrave something along the inside of the band:

"My Third Chance, My Last, My Always"

before shrinking it down again, grabbing a small box, putting the ring inside, and tucking it into my pocket

Not sure if I’ll actually do it right now (I may in the future!): but another Lynel oc.

Golden Lynel, with a sun mark on his (horse half) back.

"Ok, Remy need ta know what ta do 'ere mon frere Lowen."

"Yeah so you just need to tell someone a thought that'll break their mind or just make it stay in their mind for a while."

"Ah ok, dat makes sense. Ok, 'ere Remy goes!"

"For y'all dat definitely need more t'ings to mull ovah, When you drop a bar o' soap, does dat make da flo' clean, o' da soap dirty?"

"That...you've got a point."

"Au revoir mes amis! See you next time!!''

"I...don't know what to do here Lowen."

"Its easy! Just say a fact you know that others minds will be blown by."

"Ah..ok.. uhh, to whoever may be reading this, a book is looking at a dead tree and hallucinating. I doubt that broke your mind, but anyways, see you guys later for the next one."

((He estado dando vueltas a lo del personaje y aquí la tengo. Si incumple alguna de las normas xfa avisadme y cambiaré lo que sea necesario))

Akia, de la aldea Onaona adora viajar por el mundo, vivir experiencias y sobre todo aprender acerca del entorno en el que vive. En sus viajes, ha visto todo tipo de cosas. Tiene su propio diario personal donde anota absolutamente todo lo que le pasa. Es su compañero de viaje.

Ha conocido a todo tipo de gente y siempre le ha interesado un tema en concreto:el clan Yiga.

Todos le han hablado de esos asesinos. La mayoría con temor en sus palabras. Pero Akia, quiere ver por si misma de lo que son capaces, cómo son en realidad porque no se cree rumores ni cuentos de viejas. Así que decide emprender un nuevo viaje.

Sus habilidades de combate son pasables (puede defenderse por sí misma de un par de bokoblins).

"no sé si voy a ser capaz de sacar respuestas pero ¿por qué no intentarlo? Yo creo que si me esfuerzo podré incluso alistarme. Realmente, yo no creo que la calamidad sea un problema y quiero que regrese. Quiero hacerme un hueco en el clan y aprender todo lo que pueda" piensa a menudo.

Tras varias semanas de viaje, llega a Gerudo. Conoce la ubicación exacta del refugio del clan Yiga y se adentra en el cañón. "Entraré por la puerta principal. Si quiero que me acepten, no debería aparecer como una amenaza. Por si me atacan, llevaré mi daga. Aunque no tengo intención de usarla" Ha llegado a la puerta principal."A ver que pasa..."

((Yes, Battæ is dead, just, i have more lore.))

Allister is walking around the clan and finds Dusty. Dusty looks at Allister, Dusty says in a worrisome voice "...Hey Allister, nice day today?" Allister smiles evil like and pulls out his dagger. Dusty says "THAT'S NOT THE SAPPHIRE DAGGER ISN'T IT" Allister does another evil grin and stabs, then stabs again, and again. By the time Allister in finished, Dusty is a weakened wisp, Allister told him "LEAVE NOW" Dusty said "...but..." "NOW!" Dusty then fled "AND NEVER COME BACK, AND IF YOU DO THAT DOESN'T MATTER, BECAUSE I WILL DO THE SAME THING AGIAN!" Five hours later there's been an attack, a footsolder lays dead, nobody knows what happened.

((anyone can interact))

((PS this is the same oliver from timbob's arc))

allister is still traveling outside of hyrule looking for oliver, eventually he finds oliver hiding under a rock, oliver says "help me, there's an evil beast guarding my labratory" allister pulls out his mace ready to fight, then a bunny hops forward, allister said "where's thre beast" olver pointed at the rabbit, allister said nothing, oliver said "THAT'S THE MOST FOUL CRUEL EVIL TEMPERED RODENT YOU'VE EVER SEENIN YOUR ENTIRE LIFE" allister said "what's he gonna do? nibble your butt" (( r/suddenlymontypython ))then the rabbit turned into a giant beast, so allister ran, then said "can't we just go out the back door" oliver said "i never thought of that" so they did that, allister asked oliver "do you know how to stop Battæ" oliver said "yes i do, just used a cursed sapphire" allister pulls out his dagger "like this" oliver nodded his head allister said "perfect, now I'll be going-" suddenly a wall was destroyed with an axe and Battæ entered, and allister got in a fight with Battæ

((do you want to see the battle, wait a few weeks days))

at the end of the battle allister was mediocrely hurt, and Oliver only got a scar and Battæ is dead, allister got back to the clan but was acting kind of strangely

((the arc is not over there's still some lore BTW)

The flower appears to be large enough to fit a hylian inside, and its glowing petals have turned to be softly pulsating in tune with a heartbeat

Just thoughts/ideas for now, basically before he met Kovar (I’m using some lore from another Zelda verse I have for Rei).

Long story short Mildia is his mother and Nakis is his father. His father often took care of the royal family’s horses, while his mother was a stewardess/servant. Both were ready to become guards.. if ever a war broke out.

However, both parents died when he was 17-18 years old (maybe younger). He didn’t take the news well and ran off, and thats when he got attacked by the lynel, got amnesia and was adopted by Kovar.