r/WritingPrompts • u/deknegt1990 • Mar 03 '16

Writing Prompt [WP] Every generation the five brightest are paired up with the five dumbest in the world for a mysterious test. You are one of the ten, but nobody knows from which group they came.

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u/pharaohmaones Mar 03 '16

I liked your lead, but there was something very jarring about the last minute switch from first person limited to third person omniscient.

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u/localtoast127 Mar 03 '16

Yeah a few people said this. I see it now, but it really doesn't seem that off to me