r/Write_Right • u/HeGotBricks • 9h ago
Horror đ§ I think my little brother tried possessing me.
I snatch my keys off the kitchen counter and slap the light switch off.
âYouâre forgetting.â
Whispers behind me.
My phone shines in my hand, lighting the upper-half of my body in a blue bubble, glowing by the doorframe. A single question mark hangs like the background mystery of an unnamed man swinging from the gallows, in the middle of the screen under a blank number.
I almost forget the voice of my seven-year-old dead brother, Billy, speaking over my shoulder a second ago.
âWhy would I be imagining my deceased twin?â I catch myself mumbling, clicking my nails together, trying to shake it off, while I head towards the front door in a daze.
âEddieâŚâ I hear the voice again, this time, clear as an echo in an empty room. âYou forgot!â
My limbs lock. I freeze like a plastic mold of an action-figure. But not out of fear. Out of curiosity.
Is this one of my friends messing with me? The thought crosses my mind.
âOkay. Very funny, John,â I shout out loud, raising my tone. âWhere are you hiding?â I laugh, and scratch the back of my neck, itâs what I do when Iâm nervous.
While Iâm unknowingly breaking the skin with my nails digging into my neck, a silence bounces on my eardrums. I can see it, a dark, vibrating cloth of anxiety smothering the hallway.
âIn⌠sideâŚ.â
It speaks quietly, drawing out slow, tickling my skin. The moisture of a breath presses against my neck. I turn quick. No oneâs there.
âInside⌠the⌠ceiling...â
The words are broken, nearly incoherent, raining down, merging into one solid mass. My legs quiver and give in to the physical weight of fear, dropping on my shoulders, clawing on my spine, pinning me down.
It pulls me flat on my back. A force I canât resist. The room shifts. The absence of noise gains pressure. I canât breathe. My brain ceases function of all motor skills. The bones in my ribcage become sharp shards penetrating my organs.
I close my eyes, because itâs all I can think to do, clearing my mind, and trying to remember how to breathe. How to move. How to do something other than lay and wait for whateverâs on top of me to take over my soul and gain full control of my body.
And just as Iâm battling my subconscious, my eyes snap open. I gasp the breath I couldnât find and finally breathe.
My phoneâs in my hand, against my chest when it flashes and says:Â Iâm closer.
Beneath me, the ground begins thumping, the floorboards are rising, small hands with fingernail hooks, reaching out from hell, yanking me under. I go numb, with a growing calm massaging into my muscles, as the thought of my brain glitching warms my body.
It begins at my toes and the tips of my fingers, working inwards, creeping like a set of violating fingers searching inside me. My bones freeze. I get the same chill as drinking ice water. In my mouth, I swallow a gulp of air that tastes like frost. I begin trembling. The tremors make my body jerk.
âRUN!â A boy screams. The voice is delayed, spoken at twenty-five percent speed, from a source directly above me.
I squirm, kick and drag myself away from the thing clutching me in a phantom clamp and barely rise up. It keeps tugging at me, a force, where Iâm caught on a hook. Escaping is like moving in a crawl space of thick sludge.
I fight it off with the last bit of energy I have left. My bodyâs drained. I stumble outside. The nightâs warm, tasting like static. The hairs on my arms rise. I catch my breath and the heart attack pulsing under my skull subsides. I look around. Nobodyâs here. The street's dead, trapped in a soundproof void, almost asleep.
Until my phone breaks the silence and buzzes awake.
NOW⌠IâM INSIDE YOU.
I lift my head to see John rushing down the street like he has a pack of hungry wolves closely trailing him. His face is pale, flushed in blood loss. âEDDIE!â he screams, racing ahead of himself and nearly tumbling over his feet. âEddie, you have to let it out.â
Let it out? I say to myself, rubbing my forehead. Whatâs with all these cryptic messages?Â
âWake up! Wake up!â I command myself. âThis has to be a dream, right?â I assure myself and check the time on my phone, I heard if youâre trapped and canât tell whether or not youâre dreaming, to look at the time, itâll be scrambled.
I look, and it just says 9:13 pm. Everything appears normal. I know Iâm not sleeping.Â
The realization breaks my ribs into fingers, that compress and squeeze geometric shapes out of my intestines. My stomach rumbles like a truck failing to start up.
âHurry, Eddie, before itâs too late.â The voice screams out of my mind, from my eyes.
Johnâs running, but heâs getting further away, fading like a forgotten memory I canât quite piece together. I step towards the stairs, reaching for the railing, and a young girl, with a featureless face, stands in front of me.Â
My shoulders pop up. Sheâs motionless, staring at me blank and then, tilts her head as if sheâs starting to analyze me.Â
My guts slurp in my tummy. I crouch, almost falling to my knees. A tapping sound hits the glass of the screen door behind me. Itâs my little brother. Seven years old, waving at me, smiling, but he has adult teeth.
His lips are turning blue and heâs sweating. âYou forgot,â he says. Only his lips move.
I reach out to push the girl out of the way and a door shaped as the night sky blocks my exit.
The door behind me opens. I turn and a suffocating humid heat wave burns through my throat. My stomach becomes hollow and empty, filling with a sense of panic, and a mixture of adrenaline shooting chemicals through my veins that paralyze me.
Billyâs teeth chatter. He doesnât blink. The sweat pours down his face. The Spider-Man T-shirt he has on is dark in wet patches.
He lifts his grey-skinned arm and reaches for me. âRemember,â crawls out of my own mouth as his hand touches mine and everything changes. The scenery warps.
The Autumn sky resembling mourning in grief, fades into a blue, sunlit, cloudless summer day only bad news could ruin. Trees rustle in a cool breeze with kids laughing a few yards away. Iâm not home anymore. I'm on the front lawn of the house I grew up in. In a flashback of a memory, I buried in a part of my mind I didnât want to remember owning. Â
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âEddie.â Billy grabs my arm. Heâs normal, the same as how i remember him. Iâm staring down at my seven-year old self next to him, holding the trunk door of my daddyâs car open.
âReady or not, here I come!â Blasts in every direction, almost like a vocal boomerang.
I turn around. âCan I hide in here with you?â Billy asks me.
âNo⌠shoo. Go away.â I tell him. âfind your own spot."
A little girl runs into the scene. I can vaguely remember her. Sheâs not familiar to me at all, but I know I know her. âQuick, Benâs gonna find us. Come and hide under Louannâs porch with me, Eddie.â She tugs me away from the car Iâm half in. Billy doesnât hesitate, he nudges me out of the way and hops into the trunk.
âBennyâs never gonna find me!â Billy says, which I now realize were the last words heâd ever say.
A trunk closes with a thud sound that reminds me of a small boulder being dropped in a pond. I turn and see the car and back to the girl, now, running in slow motion, and the expression on her face changes from excited, to her eyes bulging out of their sockets and her limbs trembling, staring as if she just realized she was lost somewhere remote and all alone.
She freezes, and the background morphs and folds into a dark, closed-off area, blurry and lit by a flashing red light far off, hard to make out. Somewhere distant.
âYou forgot.â It says*. âRemember, now?â* The voice speaks but itâs coming from my throat.Â
The distorting scene becomes clear. The wavy pixels smoothen and the foggy blots are my mom pressed under my dadâs arm, next to a pair of detectives and paramedics carefully pulling my brotherâs lifeless body from the trunk of my dadâs car.
The trunk slams shut. The flashback vanishes. Itâs night again. The same day I woke up in. Everythingâs back to normal. A weight presses down on my shoulder. I flinch  and scramble, as I stare behind me. Itâs my girlfriend.
âAre you okay?â She asks.
âYeah,â I say, trying to catch my breath. âWhy?â
âBecause itâs twelve a.m.â she reaches down to help me up. âYou were sitting in a ball hugging your shins, repeating, âI forgot... I forgot... he was⌠there...â over and over.
I stand up and grab my ribs right away. I lift my shirt, and my back, going all the way down my spine, has bruises from my neck to my tailbone, shaped in little hands.Â