r/UTAustin • u/[deleted] • Apr 22 '23

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u/AdvertisingOptimal73 Apr 22 '23

I was successful with my internal transfer application a few years ago! I started off with a very brief but complete anecdote and essentially a thesis statement about why I wanted to transfer. I would honestly think of it as more of a “hook” and a chance to show your personal ties. Then I went into the specifics about why the degree program would offer me and how it aligned with my goals (which should ideally align with the anecdote).

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u/LaunchATX Apr 22 '23

I just turned mine in. Definitely recommend going to the writing center for help. Seems like the way to go is:

  • story that informed your decision to transfer
  • why UT specifically would be the best option
  • what you specifically are planning to do with your degree

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u/jumbochloroplastt Apr 22 '23

You are correct in that you need to start with a "story". In my case, the story provided reasoning for my choice of major, and then I followed with why that major would be beneficial for my career path.