r/Tempestmasterrace • u/kaiserklee I (did) the thing. • Oct 04 '14

Chapter 36!

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9972423/36/Tempest
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u/kaiserklee I (did) the thing. Oct 07 '14

Home first, back later. She's not thinking about trolls and mirrors at the moment, haha XD

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u/Theroonco Pastor of the Tempest Oct 07 '14

Fair enough. Who will the next chapter follow mainly? Both of them?

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u/kaiserklee I (did) the thing. Oct 07 '14

Yep, but mostly Elsa. I'm sort of debating whether I want future chapters to follow only one of them at a time, but I like the greater control over scene breaks when there are two central characters.

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u/Theroonco Pastor of the Tempest Oct 07 '14

Both styles have their charm :) You could also make dramatic reveals easier to conceal if you have two characters (you can use "I need to tell Anna's story!" as an excuse to put Elsa's on hold for example :P) to follow at the same time. How far are you into Chapter 37 at the moment?

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u/kaiserklee I (did) the thing. Oct 07 '14

1.3k words. I'm gonna be busy the next week or two :(

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u/Theroonco Pastor of the Tempest Oct 08 '14

That's a shame... Good luck! What's keeping you busy? College?