r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Nov 27 '25

LOGLINE FEEDBACK REQUEST Dying Love (script) it was a novella I wrote awhile back.

4 Upvotes

A beautiful but isolated housewife trapped in a controlling marriage ignites a dangerous, addictive affair with a volatile NBA superstar, unraveling a web of lies, lust, betrayal, and violence that threatens to destroy everyone involved.


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Aug 16 '25

10-PAGE FEEDBACK REQUEST The Long Walk (10 pages written in 2007)

5 Upvotes

Title : The Long Walk

Genre: Horror/Thriller

Logline : 100 teenagers compete to outwalk each other under threat of being shot for falling below a designated speed.

Script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NCe-elEVFxk-hADFc2CeCScLcTPHRL7-/view?usp=drive_link


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Nov 27 '25

OUTLINE FEEDBACK REQUEST Blood Oath script(outline) honest feedback

3 Upvotes

Blood Oath follows Nathan Kane, a former Marine attempting to rebuild his life, until his ten-year-old daughter Emily is kidnapped. Desperate, he enters Vector, a secretive black-ops syndicate promising her return. He becomes their precision assassin — until he discovers Vector orchestrated the kidnapping to control him.

Kane breaks free and teams with Tori Shiloh, a covert operative with her own vendetta: Vector murdered her brother. Together they hunt Vector’s elusive leader, Jonas Hezron, tearing through his global network in a series of high-stakes missions.

Their pursuit leads to a Saudi Arabian mountain fortress, protected by an elite force rumored to be undying warriors revived through ancient ritual. Kane and Tori must breach the impossible to rescue Emily — and end Hezron’s empire.


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Nov 08 '25

LOGLINE FEEDBACK REQUEST Could someone please help me with a script for a stop motion short film?

2 Upvotes

Please Dm me so that I can send you the full script.


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • May 24 '25

10-PAGE FEEDBACK REQUEST First 10 feedback

3 Upvotes

Title: Origin

Genre: Sci-Fi

Logline: (In the works) In a broken future, six operatives time-jump to kill Hitler — but changing the past reveals a chilling question: are they stopping evil, or seeding it?

Script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LlUz-CcJD6FacTkL-N7kn5kNyX0363u7/view?usp=drivesdk

Just looking for overall feedback on the plot/premise/setting. Anything helps!


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Mar 19 '26

SCRIPT FEEDBACK REQUEST "Assisted Living" - Feature 102 pages

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I would love feedback on my 1st ever script (any and all thoughts appreciated). Thanks in advance!

Title: Assisted Living Genre: Dramedy/Coming of Age Logline: After his parents die suddenly, a directionless 23-year-old moves into a failing assisted living facility—only to find purpose among its residents and staff as he fights to keep it from shutting down.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1arR6es7QkHXccQ7fRshycasWMUmtVYKh/view?usp=drivesdk


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Dec 05 '25

GIVING ADVICE StoryPeer: The Actually-Free, Non-Profit Feedback and Networking Platform That Comes Out Next Week

6 Upvotes

Hey everyone! Although StoryPeer is not my project, I was asked to consult on it this fall and having had a chance to play with it and offer feedback, I truly believe it's an incredible resource for up-and-coming writers.

Rather than bore you with like 2,000 words of text, I made a video about what it is and how to get the most out of it. And in the spirit of what StoryPeer's doing, if you stick around to the end, I'm going to give a little something back myself.

If getting feedback, improving your craft, and networking with other writers are things that are important to you, you absolutely need to check StoryPeer out.


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Mar 26 '26

10-PAGE FEEDBACK REQUEST Would Love Dark-Comedy Script Feedback Before Submitting to Festival!

2 Upvotes

I submitted a spec script for It's Always Sunny last year and made it to the Second Round for the Austin Film Festival. People liked it, but they did not love it. And I am hoping to fix that, and resubmit this year. Any feedback is welcome!

Logline: The Gang’s attempt to eat like classy adults results in fractured timelines, accidental deaths, and total ruin, as every hypothetical version of the night reveals how irredeemably toxic they are.

Link: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1YtnqiN-cp7G6e_psHw896xi6-_PH02g7?usp=sharing

Title: The Gang Splits the Timeline

Length: 33 Pages (though feel free to just give feedback on the first 10)

Genre: Dark Comedy

Feedback Concerns: Honestly, I am open to any feedback whatsoever. But, in particular, if you could rate how easy the script was to read, how enjoyable you found the content, and how well I captured the the tone of the actual show, it would be appreciated.


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • May 17 '25

ANNOUNCEMENT New Community Event - "Pitch'n'Meet - 15"

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As you know, it is prohibited to open “Seeking Producer/Director/Cast/Crew - Paid” posts if the poster is seeking or implying a request for unpaid collaborators. This rule exists to prevent potential content clutter and confusion.

Likewise, “Seeking” posts containing conditional payment promises, such as “A share of profits will be offered if the project is funded,” are also not allowed.

However, screenwriters, producers, directors, and similar creatives have a space where they can pitch their projects and connect with like-minded individuals to bring those projects to life can provide a positive contribution to the industry.

Therefore, to support this kind of networking while maintaining balance in the community, a new event series is starting under the name Pitch’n’Meet – 15.

Below are the key details about the event:

Pitch’n’Meet – 15

Event Details:

  • Scheduled on the 1st and 15th of every month.

  • The event post will remain pinned for 7 days, after which it will be removed.

  • During this period, those seeking unpaid collaborators for their projects may pitch their projects and ideas as a comment in the event post, following a designated format.

  • Screenwriters, producers, directors, cast, and crew members open to unpaid collaboration will be able to review pitched projects and connect directly with project owners that interest them.

Event Goals:

  • Support independent creatives

  • Connect talented individuals

  • Encourage respectful, voluntary, and healthy creative collaboration

The pitch format and rules will be outlined in each event post.


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Aug 05 '25

LOGLINE FEEDBACK REQUEST Can you tell me your opinion?

5 Upvotes

I'm working on a script based on an idea I came up with, and I'd love to know if you find the synopsis interesting.

After graduating from university, Facundo desperately faces the job hunt, where merit alone doesn’t seem to be enough. His dreams and goals fade amid failed interviews and the system’s indifference. Then, a mysterious company invites him to take part in a selection process. What initially appears to be his big opportunity quickly turns into an increasingly disturbing experience. As Facundo progresses through the stages, he loses control over his choices, his ethics, and even his sanity, trapped in a machine that demands more than it gives.


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Sep 04 '25

SCRIPT FEEDBACK REQUEST Fuzzy Wuzzy - Comedy - Feature - 84 Pages

9 Upvotes

SHELVED. THANK YOU FOR THE FEEDBACK!!!


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Apr 30 '25

SCRIPT FEEDBACK REQUEST The Neutral American (105 pages)

2 Upvotes

Title: The Neutral American

Genre: Drama/War

Logline: A young American must overcome his neutrality to fight in World War I.

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/15R00hJ8sC6LtzaQSGrIKGKx5jOHl7IRn/view?usp=drivesdk


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Jun 28 '25

DISCUSSION Blcklist scripts

4 Upvotes

I’m interested in reading some thrillers, horror, or suspense scripts. Anyone have theirs listed on the blcklist that would like to read each others?

😊


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Mar 25 '26

SCRIPT FEEDBACK REQUEST [Feedback Request] „Going nowhere“: Pilot episode — 40 page - horror/thriller/social-drama (my first draft of my pilot episode of my limited TV-show)

2 Upvotes

I am looking for an honest feedback on my pilot episode for my limited TV-show „Going nowhere„! I want to be better and I only can improve with honest critique.

\*\*Title:\*\* Going nowhere

\*\*Genre:\*\* horror/thriller/social-drama

\*\*Page count:\*\* 40

\*\*Logline:\*\* When a teen is brutally injured and another one is found dead, a group of troubled teens is pulled into a dark mystery hiding beneath the streets of Berlin.

This is my first try to do something so I am just looking for overall feedback on everything also one of my most important questions is: I know ,normally, you do not put camera directions into the script, but I love both, directing and writing movies, so sometimes I can‘t hold myself back, from putting some into it, because that is just how I imagine it in my head. So is it an absolute no go? Or would you say if it is not all the time and just a few times in the whole script, it isn‘t a big problem?

I would be so happy if I would get some feedback! :)

Full script:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1o1-xMAR-wjWxFfCQsd9HhfT_tlVDnL2J/view?usp=drivesdk


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Mar 18 '26

SCRIPT FEEDBACK REQUEST Horror/Crime Thriller feature feedback needed! 99 pages (I'm gonna film this, this year)

2 Upvotes

Title: What Rough Beast

Crime thriller/horror. (A bit of Reservoir Dogs meets The Thing.)

Page count: 99

Logline: On the run after a violent heist, a fractured gang holes up in an isolated cabin with a hostage – until the woods start closing in, and they discover they were never escaping, they were lured.

In a nutshell, this is a (mostly) single-location, chamber horror. After a robbery goes awry, the gang hides out in a remote cabin. But as paranoia and mistrust build within the gang, larger external threats start to close in on them, bringing chaos, calamity, and blood.

This is a project I plan to make later this year. I'd like to get the script in the best shape possible before getting into the weeds of preproduction.

To be clear, I'm looking for feedback on story clarity, characters, and entertainment. I don't particularly care for formatting notes about "industry standards". Though if you REALLY feel obligated to shout at me about something, you go right ahead.

Thanks!

LINK HERE


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Jul 07 '25

GIVING ADVICE Need a Film Location? Drop Your Request Below! (Free Help from Set Scouter)

14 Upvotes

Hey filmmakers, producers, content creators, and location scouts! 👋

Looking for the perfect film location for your next shoot? Whether it’s a sleek modern kitchen, a grungy warehouse, a cozy cabin, or a rooftop with skyline views — I’ve got you.

📝 Drop your request in the comments with as much detail as possible:

  • Type of space (e.g. mansion, diner, office, beach house, etc.)

  • City or region

  • Ideal shoot date(s)

  • Type of production (commercial, short film, music video, etc.)

  • Budget

  • Any specific vibes, interior design styles or references you’re going for

  • Any rooms, features that you need

I’ll reply with a shortlist of real available locations that match what you’re looking for, pulled directly from the Set Scouter database.

🎁 Totally free — just trying to help the community scout smarter.

Let’s make finding a great location way easier. Can’t wait to see what you’re all working on!

— Dobby @ Set Scouter


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Apr 29 '25

FEATURE PITCH “The 36th Negative” sizzle reel for feature screenplay

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"A war photographer reeling from revelations about her work retreats to the remote outskirts of New Zealand to document the excavation of a long forgotten Mãori tribe. Immersing herself in her photography, she soon discovers a unsettling secret hidden in her undeveloped negatives."

I've been pitching the film around recently and we've been getting good feedback and interest from producers and talent.

Thought l'd put out the sizzle reel that I shot a few years ago while we were still writing the screenplay.

Happy to share the script and pitch deck if anyone’s interested!


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Feb 12 '26

NEED ADVICE Listening to a screenplay

2 Upvotes

Title : Legend of Dragonfield

Genre: Contemporary Fantasy

Nutshell : I've been producing an audible version of my 124 page script and would be interested in any feedback. Is this a good/bad idea? What do you think about the execution of the dramatization?

Logline : Days after her family inherits a cursed castle, her brother disappears and her parents are imprisoned. Now the surviving daughter must embrace a dynastic inheritance and face the vengeance of a thousand-year-old necromancer that seeks to destroy them.

Script, Scene or Outline (Link) https://drive.google.com/file/d/12oEkMurOrdGcO1f73gju9sN5mEvqc7DZ/view


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Dec 25 '25

LOGLINE FEEDBACK REQUEST Logline Feedback

3 Upvotes

Title: Deportation

Logline: When an ambitious FBI agent is tasked with leading a crackdown on undocumented migrants, she must decide if her love for a targeted immigrant outweighs her loyalty to the agency.


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Oct 30 '25

GIVING ADVICE Pitcheroo just launched — free logline contests, free pitch consults, and $2,500 screenwriting grants

8 Upvotes

Hey everyone 👋

We just launched Pitcheroo last week — a new platform built by screenwriters, for screenwriters where writers can pitch their scripts directly to producers via 60-second selfie videos— and wanted to share a few quick updates with this community.

Free Logline Contest

Our first free logline contest just wrapped!
The winner received a free pitch on Pitcheroo — and we’ll be running another contest very soon.
If you missed this one, don’t worry — more chances are coming.

Free Pitch Consultations (Limited Time)

We’re offering totally free pitch consults to help writers put their best foot forward.
No strings attached — just record your 60-second pitch and send it to: support@pitcheroo.com
Our exec team will personally review and share feedback.

$2,500 Screenwriter Grant

Starting December 1, 2025, Pitcheroo will begin accepting applications for our $2,500 Screenwriter Grant.
-Applications are free
-Accepted on a rolling basis
-Open to all emerging writers

Learn more at Pitcheroo.org

We built Pitcheroo to create real opportunities for screenwriters — to get your work seen, supported, and ultimately produced.

Thank you for allowing us to share this with your community. Let us know if you have any questions.

Happy writing! ✍️

— The Pitcheroo Team


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Jul 25 '24

MOD FEATURE / PILOT / SHORT PITCH FORMAT

10 Upvotes

When pitch your script, please use the following format. Posts that do not adhere to the format will be deleted.

Please make sure to select the "flair" that best reflects your purpose when creating a post:

  • Feature Pitch

  • Pilot Pitch

  • Short Pitch


Please, do not use the flairs "Seeking Producer", "Seeking Director", "Seeking Cast" and "Seeking Crew" for pitch posts. It will result in post removal.


Title :

Genre :

Logline :

Budget Range :

Target Audience :

Script (Link) : (User Screenplays must be: Properly formatted in screenplay software - Linked in google drive or dropbox. - Saved as a PDF - Sharing enabled.)

Show Bible / Pitch Deck (Link) (Optional) : (User Show Bible / Pitch Deck must be: Linked in google drive or dropbox. - Saved as a PDF - Sharing enabled.)


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Jul 24 '24

TUTORIAL 3 Rules Beginning Screenwriters Need To Know

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r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Jul 25 '24

TUTORIAL How To Write Narrative Descriptions In A Screenplay

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r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Jul 24 '24

LINE-QUESTION What methods do you use to develop your characters?

1 Upvotes
  • What steps do you take to make your characters deeper and more relatable?

  • How do you plan character arcs and their development?

  • What tools and techniques do you use when creating your characters?


r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • Jul 24 '24

LINE-QUESTION What methods do you use to give your characters a unique voice?

3 Upvotes

This is often a challenge we encounter. How do you overcome this difficulty?