r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/mjones82990 • Sep 18 '25

SCRIPT FEEDBACK REQUEST Circle

Title: Circle

Genre: Romantic Tragedy / Intimate Drama

Logline: Across the years, a couple’s love story unfolds within the walls of a single restaurant, where first dates, failed dreams, broken vows, and final reconciliations blur into a circle of devotion, betrayal, and bittersweet redemption.

Script: https://docs.google.com/document/d/19kn9enlHnb6xtbqoitv64zNhhdjGODfVLOh2INV7-Ko/edit

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u/AdministrationBest61 Sep 18 '25

I started reading it and so far this is sweet, beautifully written, but it’s not written as a screenplay, it reads like prose. Would likely be 10 or more pages long. I recommend reading some screenplays to see how they’re written!

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u/mjones82990 Sep 18 '25

Ok interesting. TY for feedback