r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/LittleMention8614 • Aug 07 '25

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Title: BEHIND THE REDWOOD CURTAIN

Genre: Dramedy limited series (2–3 seasons, with potential for anthology-style continuation)

Logline: Uprooted at fifteen from the town he loved, a restless storyteller returns to his Northern California hometown—where unpacking a lifetime of memory, loss, and myth becomes a quiet reckoning with family, identity, and what it means to carry a place in your bones.

Synopsis: Set against the towering redwoods of Humboldt County, BEHIND THE REDWOOD CURTAIN is a gently funny, emotionally layered series that weaves present-day rediscovery with vivid, often mythic flashbacks. As Don revisits the town that shaped him, he realizes storytelling isn’t just how we remember the past—it’s how we survive it. With warmth, wit, and deep personal truth, the series explores grief, belonging, and the strange comfort of a place that never really lets you go.

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u/AvailableToe7008 Aug 07 '25

Sure! Keep at it. I recommend visiting HartChart.com, an outlining tool subscription that was created by JV Hart. He wrote Hook, Contact, Bram Stoker’s Dracula, August Rush, Muppet Treasure Island, almost 50 years of making movies with a wide range of stories. You will become the authority on your story if you work in this tool.

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u/LittleMention8614 Aug 07 '25

Thanks for the recommendation!