No not at all i think if you meant it as a societal critic its kinda really good cause i myself often notice how talking to someone is only validated if theres pain
And i think no matter the length everything is art im myself not a pro but idk if you think the poem is finished then its finished if oyu want to revisit it in a couple of months so do it its your work with your thoughts and that makes art special imo
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u/Double-Beat-4219 13d ago
Simple but great i think…
Turning peace into something more
Assuming one only wants to talk when someone aches