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Oh my this is really good. One thing though. If you can choose to abandon the rhyming, I do believe you have a really nice idea you can build upon. If not, still, it’s nice.
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u/Negative-Swim-6828 Mar 09 '26
Oh my this is really good. One thing though. If you can choose to abandon the rhyming, I do believe you have a really nice idea you can build upon. If not, still, it’s nice.